My Rubbish alt :(

[Hurtone]

This is my 2nd alt.
I need help like i need blood on it lol, but i dnt no where to put red to look good.
http://uploadpicz.com/images/DRVSW32.png (http://uploadpicz.com)
hurtone.

[scott]

That made me laugh idk why lol.

[PaintYourTarget]

I think you also need to carry on the neck and the hood to make it look more rounded. Blood should be on the bone, neck and in a puddle below the head?
As it's only your second, I wont go into too much depth with CC, but for what you've done it's good.

[jameslarden]

I like the alt - it is very good - just add some blood - you may be able to take the blood from that habbo furni - thw one of the murder scene chalk drawing if person

[Alarx]

dont worry, i've seen much worse.
effort: 9/10
presentation: 5/10

[ItsDave]

I think you also need to carry on the neck and the hood to make it look more rounded. Blood should be on the bone, neck and in a puddle below the head?
As it's only your second, I wont go into too much depth with CC, but for what you've done it's good.

What he said, its simple bodly looks, you cant just have one curved side of the neck, you need to keep it going round to show its a next, otherwise it looks like a flat peice of cardboard with an un-shaded bone popping out.

[Samishlol]

I found that funny!

[Hurtone]

i no its rubbish but why is it funny

[brandon]

i no its rubbish but why is it funny
It's not rubbish, I think you're being too harsh on yourself. :)

[Hurtone]

Thanks, im guna try make it beeter lol