Leela from Futurama

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Wip 1:http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z197/paragram/250px-Leela.png
Wip 2:http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z197/paragram/Leelawip2.png
Finished Product:http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z197/paragram/Leelafinishedproduct.png

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please give comments (:

[Con]

The hair is a bit OTT + messed up on the fringe,

Apart from that, It's amazing!
Welldone!

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OTT? yeah, i get the part about the fringe.
think you can fix it?

thanks alot ^^

[DozenFuries]

It looks damn well. The hair could be a little bit smoother :)
8/10 +rep

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It looks damn well. The hair could be a little bit smoother :)
8/10 +rep

Heh, thanks for the rep!
Yeah, I'm going to try fixing the hair... make it perfect (in my eyes).

[PaintYourTarget]

The black outline is very jagged and could probably use a few pixels being moved about to make it smother, perhaps a tad of shading/AA to make the transition from colour to black not so harsh and obvious.
The boots need to look slightly more curved and the trousers lightened up to make the shading and leg easier to see.

Well done on the pose, but Leela's curvy and your Habbo is blocky. Perhaps look into incorporating that into your next version?

[H0BJ0B]

The hair is a bit OTT + messed up on the fringe,

Apart from that, It's amazing!
Welldone!


It looks damn well. The hair could be a little bit smoother :)
8/10 +rep


The black outline is very jagged and could probably use a few pixels being moved about to make it smother, perhaps a tad of shading/AA to make the transition from colour to black not so harsh and obvious.
The boots need to look slightly more curved and the trousers lightened up to make the shading and leg easier to see.

Well done on the pose, but Leela's curvy and your Habbo is blocky. Perhaps look into incorporating that into your next version?

What they said. OTT means over the top. Improve the hair and that'll be one of the best alterations I've seen all day in a long time.

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Mmk, in the updated version I will try to:

Curve off the waist and legs,
Fix the Hair Fringe
Make the pants a dark, dark grey, NOT BLACK,
Round the boots off to give it a more realistic style
Smoothen the arm line

[reeana]

Yeah its good. You need to edit the transition between the boot and trouser on <<<<<<< that side as the trouser leg just looks like 2D rather than blocky and 3D

[Paragram]

Revised alt with all of the suggestions taken in hand:
http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z197/paragram/Leelafinishedproduct2.png

You'll notice the black in the pants is lighter, the waist is slim and goes to bigger to fit the boots, her belly is farther towards the middle, the <<<< arm was smoothened, and the fringe on the hair was fixed.

[HELPER-Ghost]

Revised alt with all of the suggestions taken in hand:
http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z197/paragram/Leelafinishedproduct2.png

You'll notice the black in the pants is lighter, the waist is slim and goes to bigger to fit the boots, her belly is farther towards the middle, the <<<< arm was smoothened, and the fringe on the hair was fixed.

Left boot is bigger than the right, pixel error on the right boot, and another at the waist, and the hair still doesnt look quite right

[Paragram]

what are the supposed errors?
i know what they are but not what errors would look like
xP
i'll make the boot bigger.
and i might be able to edit the hair a bit.

[HBBLB]

Woooo Leela!

[J0SH]

Pretty good, work on the eye a bit more though. :P

[Accipiter]

Thats a Huge step up from those last alts :) All i can point out really is, No shading on the arms the handle on the gun is 2D nd the neck of the boots is 2D, and a little pixel error round the right boob were you removed the arm.

[dbgtz]

Yer quite a lot of shading is missing. Yer hair needs improving too. wd though.

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new partially major update version:

http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z197/paragram/Leelafinishedproduct3.png

Thanks to HELPER-Ghost who gave me some great shading tips ;)

[Alupe]

Lol thats pretty good 8/10

[Roughage]

In my opinion, the shading on the ponytail needs to have more pixel detail like the actual hair on her head. Round it more, like the actual picture you're working from. It's too straight when it comes out of the ponytail; to make it more natural, curve it more. Hope this critcsm helped.

[Meti]

i love it

good job

[Tim.]

Lol that looks quite like her

[reeana]

I like the shading more on the 3rd update (good one, Aaron ;)) But the actual character looks better on the 2nd update.

[rachael.]

thats rather sexual tbh
9/10 xoxo

[Rollerkingdom]

I loved it :D
10-10 Nice
Well done