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Rollerkingdom
13-10-2008, 05:35 PM
This is one of the character from "Naruto The Movie 2"
It's a Basic Temujin..

http://i38.tinypic.com/21bpzqu.jpg

Here's the Reference Pic.. But i made him "Basic"
Which means no Cape, sword, or anything like that..
http://i34.tinypic.com/2lrfow.jpg

Sulai
13-10-2008, 07:15 PM
i actually like it, well done

:)

ItsDave
13-10-2008, 08:32 PM
i actually like it, well done

:)

What I woulda sed.

Kyle
26-10-2009, 05:19 PM
The legs lack any shading at all causing them to appear flat.

darker shade of top is too dark, try shifting hue a little more.

Shoes have unneeded dark patches.

body plate is too small, shoulder pads are disproportionate to one another.

Hair looks nothing like reference, oh and the eyes are rather small.

Rollerkingdom
26-10-2009, 05:41 PM
The legs lack any shading at all causing them to appear flat.

darker shade of top is too dark, try shifting hue a little more.

Shoes have unneeded dark patches.

body plate is too small, shoulder pads are disproportionate to one another.

Hair looks nothing like reference, oh and the eyes are rather small.

Thanks for the critic :) however i kinda dislike this anyway so it's like trash for me..

Accipiter
27-10-2009, 11:28 AM
you've missed quite a bit off the reference, his boots are higher than little habbo ones. did you just work on the top?

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