C&C please

[iAdam]

Herro.

I needed some money so I thought I'd start designing some stuff, only done one PROPER one before so yeah I'm pretty much a newbie.

Here it is;
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/504/portfoliocopymp2.png

C&C please, I'm looking to sell this so need to make it better.

[Aflux]

You can't sell that.

[iAdam]

Nice C&C -.-

Why can't I sell it?

[Joe!]

For a start get rid of the scanlines and have a nice font, then get back to us :)
Also the like gradient thing at the top of boxes, can't remember name, but no.

[HabbDance]

i like it, but it's to dull, brighten it up! i think he can sell this...

[iAdam]

Whats wrong witht he font so I can change it? and without the scanlines it looks too bland.

I might make another coloured version.

[Meti]

It looks allright.
1. I could rip that in 2 seconds. You need to watermark it.
2. It looks too boring.
3. Remove the scanlines.

[iAdam]

Without the scanlines it looks bland in teh ackground, I'll see about making them lok better, and I'll watermark it.

[Meti]

and remove the inner shadow

[Nereo]

Put some colour in it man! :P