My Old House (Small but important update)

[TitaniumRubber]

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As Ekalb said, I should keep all copy and paste down to a minimum, which I have done by removing most C+P and leaving only the characters as C+P,

I was going to post it in the old thread but i couldn't find it.

The main update here is on the windows and wood Floor.

Thank You, Please give me as much constructive criticism as possible so I can improve, also the roof cannot be made any straighter, i tied but no luck

Yours Sincerely,
Siz.

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[Casio]

9/10 because the chimney looks to flat

+rep

[Livv]

Um.. The beige, light yellow w/e looks weird.. Kinda ruins it.
The rest is great though :)

[Accipiter]

it looks good but its missing a little umph, its to plain, maybe add window sills with plants on and a Gutter on the roof? then you should make a garden :D Still 9/10 though 1 is the missing umph.

[ExtraKen]

The inside of the chimney should be dark.

Also try to put a shading on the house like 1 side darker than the other side so it will look more realistic. And ye I think if you put a lil more detail in the yellow bits like dunno some texture than it will look great.

And I hope you will be planning to add a garden etc :)

Good luck looking good so far! :)

[e5]

Yeah, I don't like the top of the chimney. It's not very chimney like.

[Holofoil]

Isn't the roof wonky?

[Con]

9/10 because the chimney looks to flat

+rep
No it doesn't, It looks a bit thin at the top - that's all.

I think you should add more into the garden instead of just a really big green area. :) +rep

[Freeza101]

Looks really good.
Well done

[e5]

Isn't the roof wonky?
He's already said that he can't make it any straighter? Read the post!

[shizzle]

It looks great well done!

[Samtraff]

Is it just me or it the top right window wrong. The floor inside looks higher than the other two. I dont know is just doesnt look right for some reason.

[TitaniumRubber]

The inside of the chimney should be dark.

Also try to put a shading on the house like 1 side darker than the other side so it will look more realistic. And ye I think if you put a lil more detail in the yellow bits like dunno some texture than it will look great.

And I hope you will be planning to add a garden etc :)

Good luck looking good so far! :)

One side of the wood is darker than the other already but i don't think the change is strong enough, also the beige does have texture but again maybe the difference is not strong enough, I did try the chimney darker thing before but it didn't look good but I will try again, I also planned to make a garden at first but then I felt like I couldn't be bothered but I may try.

And to everyone else about the window ledges and flowers, I will try that out.

Thank You all for C+C

Yours Sincerely,
Simon.

[Mayyte]

I think its elite worthy ;) +rep

[ExtraKen]

One side of the wood is darker than the other already but i don't think the change is strong enough, also the beige does have texture but again maybe the difference is not strong enough, I did try the chimney darker thing before but it didn't look good but I will try again, I also planned to make a garden at first but then I felt like I couldn't be bothered but I may try.

And to everyone else about the window ledges and flowers, I will try that out.

Thank You all for C+C

Yours Sincerely,
Simon.

Maybe just do the inside of the chimney black and add some smokish effect :)

[ItsDave]

I'd say add some shadows onto a certain side. That would be impressive. But so far quite excellent.

[Boonzeet]

Hi Titrub/Siz, thought you left.

Ummm it's okay, a little basic, chimney is really messed up, and I think you could make this a ton better with some cracks in the wall, dirt in places just to remove the monotony of the peice.

[Tim.]

Woah i love it. ELITE!

[TitaniumRubber]

Before I get a mod to replace the image with my updated version, who thinks I should windows in the roof?

[GrebSkeb]

its good but where is the shading?

[Nuka-Cola]

very good 9/10 ( chimney needs sorting but thats already been mentioned )