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Rollerkingdom
04-11-2008, 10:41 PM
Well.. this is a simple attempt but it's sure something
all americans will remember, the september 11 marked the history
in United States, and took down the twin towers.. We miss them xD

Btw Should i try to make the airplane coming on its way..
or try to make it on like fire and the smoke :O

http://i38.tinypic.com/2e3zzaa.jpg

Earthquake
05-11-2008, 04:22 AM
You've already posted this?

Kyle
05-11-2008, 03:07 PM
it makes no sense

"september 11th
we miss u"

i get what ur trying to say - that we miss the people that died but it looks like "september 11th we miss u" asin u miss september 11th

Meti
05-11-2008, 03:12 PM
I love it.
Good job

jameslarden
08-11-2008, 03:54 PM
...people could get the wrong idea about the text - it sounds as if september the 11th is being wanted again, even though you don't mean that. Just a bit of alteration to the text.

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