Should I?

[.Zi]

Well, i've been trying to work out my layout making skills and this is my first habbo layout, should I sell it or should I improve it, if i should improve it, how? I made it in paint.net took me about 1 hour, btw, the white box in the banner is ment to be for a usersytem

http://uploadpicz.com/images/K7QIB4U.png

Comments?

Rate out of 10 :)

Im not to keen on the two side colours myself, but i could get a good match, if you can give me some good colours +rep. +rep to all helpful answers!


P.S. this isnt free, i am just asking opnions.

[Jibbish]

Improve it and then sell it.
Use darker colours, because it looks similar to the paint default colours.

[lSnowie]

On paint.net when your making Habbo layouts, don't use smooth font, look on one of the bars at the top there is a drop down menu, it says smooth or sharp, for a habbo layout you use sharp, it makes the font more pixelized and habboier

[Decode]

Its nice, but the content box needs to be bigger. I would suggest something like this:

http://www.tehupload.com/uploads/6985c57e6794f32Untitled.jpg

[.Zi]

Its nice, but the content box needs to be bigger. I would suggest something like this:

http://www.tehupload.com/uploads/6985c57e6794f32Untitled.jpg


Like what??? :P

could somebody give me some colours I should add/change and tell what to replace it with please.

[Decode]

Like what??? :P

could somebody give me some colours I should add/change and tell what to replace it with please.
I did include an image :P But tehupload is down at the moment so no one can see it :(

[.Zi]

www.uploadpicz.com (http://www.uploadpicz.com) upload it there :)


Btw, i think im going to release it free, unless somebody gives me alot of help and i improve it :)

[Calabrian]

2/10

sorry dont like it

[Dentafrice]

I did include an image :P But tehupload is down at the moment so no one can see it :(
Sorry about that, it's back up :P Jewbear was also down.

iFuse had a server suspended by their ISP, which brought some heartache to all of us :P

[.Zi]

2/10

sorry dont like it


What dont you like about it.

And tom, with your idea the only problem is that theres a big gap at the bottem and i think it needs filling, maybe expand the content box down more, idk :P please post it with the content box down :P

[Calabrian]

What dont you like about it.


this is going to sound so harsh
but
literally everything

Sorry im hard to please so ignore my low score

[.Zi]

OK, fair enough. Everybody is intitled to an opinion. How could I improve it?

[Jebbo.]

i dont realy like it either, its the colours i dont like the most. but well done for trying :)

[.Zi]

What colours should I use instead then?

[Meti]

Image doesn't work for me

[Pazza]

it's not too ba,d it has a nice concept.

Try alligning it all , so it looks tidier. Then bringing the thickness of the lines down, make the font sharp as someone said and try around with colours, and posible gradients :)

+rep because I like the idea