Raft (Second Alt)

[Re-Education]

http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/5348/raftby7.png


This is my second alt, i thought i'd go for something simpler this time. I'm quite proud of it if i am honest. Feedback and ratings would be appreciated.:)

[Casio]

Your alts are very good as this is your second i think youll get very far with your work

10/10

[Swinkid]

Not accactly habboish, but i suppose it could fit in the habbo look if it were in the hotel.

I have looked at your other work, it is nice. I think you will also go far if you carry on.

[Boonzeet]

Your alts are very good as this is your second i think youll get very far with your work

10/10

whaaaaaaaaaat? Seriously... in all honesty, and some people will agree. 10/10. for this? Yeah its good in the way it is standing out, it completes its purpose and looks like its supposed to... but people should give 10/10's to more complex and detailed work.

percentage for purpose: 74%
percentage for graphics: 52%

you can improve it by making the vines go under the wood too, adding more detail to how it hits the water (ripples, splashes, waves) and make the water more detailed. taa daaaa.