My first ever layout.

[Ajax.]

My first ever layout. Havent finished it.

http://www.tehupload.com/share/17151

[Excellent2]

Hate it. You've done what everybody does on their first layout and just uses tons of gradients provided by photoshop :P Try looking for inspiration.

[Jackboy]

Its alright.

I like the banner bit, however its a bit too tall.

[Jinl]

You've done some quick boxes and a gradient overlay...

I wouldn't call that a layout, You need to style it.
Read some tuts. :)