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-x-Kerrianne-x-
06-07-2005, 08:00 PM
If the world stopped wars,
If the worlds all one,
If the sky was blue,
And we could see the sun.

Why do we hurt,
Why can we feel pain,
Does the world not care?
And nothing is the same.

Cant we have harmony,
Throughout the land,
And the sun was shining,
On the sea and the sand.

Cant we hold hands as one
And always be together,
Stop wars and hate!
Not just now- BUT FOREVER.

06-07-2005, 08:00 PM
nice, did you make that up yourself?

-x-Kerrianne-x-
06-07-2005, 08:04 PM
Sure did and im proud too :D

Jinxxed
08-07-2005, 07:03 PM
Wow that's really great :)
9/10, keep it up..

-x-Kerrianne-x-
08-07-2005, 07:05 PM
:o Thanks Photographed :)

Tommy
08-07-2005, 07:08 PM
The opening paragraph is a bit iffy but the rest is amazing!

10/10 (Except first bit ;P)

-x-Kerrianne-x-
08-07-2005, 07:09 PM
Lol, I will take that into account.

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