Poem - i cant take it no more

[Rosie]

What did I do wrong,
That you had to hurt me strong?
Is it just a need,
For you to know my heart can bleed?

Was it hard to
Say "I love you,"
When you don't really care?

Was it fun to
Drive me crazy,
And see how much I'll dare?

Did you wish
To play my heart,
Until it falls apart?

All these things
You did to me,
Put me in a misery.

I pray for it
To go away,
But this feeling came to stay.

I don't have anything else to say,
But to tell you that
My life will never be OK.

So please
Don't hurt me anymore,
Cause of this pain I can't take more.

What do you think of this peom ?

[-x-Kerrianne-x-]

The poem style is varied all throughout

[DJ-Scotty]

I like this poem the desciption is gd n i remember wen we done these in english *cough* mines is better then ur Lol :p



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[Rosie]

Lol shut up scott we did diff catogaried poems all together so.. :P Yours was about behind a dustbin or some weird thing like that mines is about a misery life sorta thing ! :)