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Hiccupmax
07-07-2005, 05:38 PM
As you take the last few steps up to the dark doorway you take one last breath,
you stand up tall and step proudly up to this door the one you have only ever dreamed of being near.
You see the ever rusty doorbell on the side,and you become overpowered with love as you ring it.
A familiar,beautiful face peers round the door,
as brittney opens the door,you take a step backwards trying to take in everything that is happening
you see the walls change into the shape of hearts
as all you can see is the face and the smile of your love one,
you take your first step inside and turn towards brittney
you feel her soft feminem skin against yours and you take her in your strong but gentle grasp and hug her ,
wishing that it would never end , the warmth of your bodies as small crystal tears of happiness fill your eyes
as you start to loosen your grip on eachothers frail bodies.
you both blush with happiness and your love towards each other is never ending.
as you walk down the hall and up the creaky stairs you
see a light at the end of the tunnel an ever smiling face of your love standing at
the top of the stairs calling you on like a small child , you rush up
towards her and again hug her ,
this time you look her in the eyes and see all the pain she has suffered being healed by your love,
you give her a small kiss on the lips and both of you tingle ,
she leads you into her room where you unpack all of your fragile belongings ,
and you look up onto the dry walls and see the 3 words jump from her lips .."I love You" and you are both gone
into a haze of love , looking deep into each others eyes you are carried away by lust , and supported
on the forever soft blanket of emotion.

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I Hope You All like It :)
Lots Of Love
Maxine :)
(p.s I Wrote This Story 4 Two Friends Brittney + Sebastion)

Hiccupmax
07-07-2005, 05:44 PM
Sorry Its Not Seperated Or Anything :)
Please Tell Me What You Think Of It ^_^
I Dont Mind if you Think Its Rubbish Because I Would Love Your Honest Opinions :)

BlueTails
08-07-2005, 12:23 AM
Nice Story x]

Owen
08-07-2005, 12:31 AM
Good story ;o

-sFusion-
08-07-2005, 12:53 AM
i like it sorta, but it does seem a little cheezy :/ still its ok.

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