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deltateamaplha
07-07-2005, 06:56 PM
I sit there tight
As I just might see you
Slight chance of that... :(
Locked away like this
Never heard a knock
In my little brown box...
In Darkness
With you been harmless :(
All I want to do is see you
But you can't find me here
Locked away without a care
No one dares to glares at me
As they can't see me :(
Locked in my box I just want to see you sun the one love I think I have
But maybe I have been mistaken
And you’re taken
Oh Sun please let me see you shine bright
Like candle light at night.....


Ok that was about a person been trapped in a box and has never seen the sun but has heard so much arout it he thinks he has love for it but never sees it:(

Owen
08-07-2005, 12:34 AM
so the sun is love?

deltateamaplha
08-07-2005, 08:39 AM
Hmmm what do you think ? The poem sorta tells you a small story. tell me your views on what you think is happening in the poem

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