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dbgtz
04-01-2009, 09:31 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/2ce50so.png
First one is the pure bred, second is the soul-sucked human version.
Views?
Oh just noticed I didn't finish the humans arm, just pretend it's shade :D

Oh if there's a real character thing called a souleater, it's not based on it!

ExtraKen
04-01-2009, 09:38 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/2ce50so.png
First one is the pure bred, second is the soul-sucked human version.
Views?
Oh just noticed I didn't finish the humans arm, just pretend it's shade :D

Oh if there's a real character thing called a souleater, it's not based on it!

O cool :D

did you think the character up yourself? :)

dbgtz
04-01-2009, 09:40 PM
I started off as the bloke and I thought I'd add on a little story starter :).

thorn
04-01-2009, 09:45 PM
I was there with you when you made this Alt

Its amazing what you did with just a plain habbo look!

The Original Souleater's feet look a bit strange, but all in all its good! :eusa_clap

Con
04-01-2009, 10:00 PM
The Soul Eater looks a bit.. flat or something.
Doesn't really have any shape to his body but apart from that I love it :D
I love the colours used and the shading. :)

Ardemax
05-01-2009, 05:52 PM
love em tom

money plz

dbgtz
05-01-2009, 05:55 PM
Heres a little new bit. "V2", slight shading changes and a tail, along with the obvious hand moves. Also a geared-up war one.
http://i42.tinypic.com/qydh.png

Ardemax
05-01-2009, 05:56 PM
first post in


they look nice

you spent a lot of time on these obv. :)

ExtraKen
05-01-2009, 06:19 PM
Heres a little new bit. "V2", slight shading changes and a tail, along with the obvious hand moves. Also a geared-up war one.
http://i42.tinypic.com/qydh.png

V2 looks better :D

love the ninjagunny one to :D wd!

Boonzeet
06-01-2009, 11:08 AM
Tom :3

They're quite good tbh!



Oh if there's a real character thing called a souleater, it's not based on it!

http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk213/ZomgAnime/Anime%20Series%20P-T/Soul-Eater.jpg

Kyle
06-01-2009, 04:25 PM
Hey Tom, you kept annoying me yesterday and telling me to post on your alt, so here goes. :D

I realise the base isn't part of your creation but I find all of the bases that you have used look awful. The first base you have used, you have drawn some kind of dodgy cracks on and cut half of it off, placing this "souleater" of yours on the edge, causing it to appear as if it is going to fall off any moment now. You could ATLEAST have made the inside lines lighter instead of black. :D The second base is the same as the first, but I quite like the effect of the slime or what ever that is. The third base, well that's just appalling! You've attempted some kind of camoflague effect, but failed so badly :P the final base is just boring :D Oh yeah, and finally, where are the shadows? :8

Okay now I've ranted about your bases I guess I should post a little something about your alts, right? Okay, the first alt you did looked very flat, due to the shading not being dark enough to stand out... I can only see the shading if I look at it closely.

Your second alt of the human is quite good, I like the way you have shaded under it's eyes etc and the slime dripping off of it, although I do have a slight problem - The color. It's extremely dull and in my opinion should be brighter.

The second soul eater you made... that's just LOL what's going on with it?

Your V2 of your first soul eater is a little better than your first - The arms look much better and you've added a tail which makes it seem slightly less flat, but I still think you need to shade the legs with a darker colour, since it doesn't show up very well. ;)

Ok this probably isnt the 36 lines of critisism I promised you, but I think I got my point across :D

dbgtz
06-01-2009, 04:53 PM
that was only 14 lines, and yes, I did fail in the camo. By the way you can't critisise an alt because of what it's doing ;)
Also only 14 lines, throne please

Accipiter
06-01-2009, 06:06 PM
i don't like the legs but he's k as kyle said you need stronger shades some of our eyes ain't good, It will probs look better towards a dark background.

Kyle
06-01-2009, 06:15 PM
that was only 14 lines, and yes, I did fail in the camo. By the way you can't critisise an alt because of what it's doing ;)
Also only 14 lines, throne please
rubbish alt, throne please

dbgtz
06-01-2009, 06:30 PM
Better then ur mum :)

dbgtz
06-01-2009, 06:30 PM
Oops sorry, double posted from lag :(

Kyle
06-01-2009, 06:49 PM
Better then ur mum :)
-rep :(

ItsDave
06-01-2009, 07:10 PM
Hm, thats cool, very imagintive. well dun.

leah
09-01-2009, 12:49 PM
lol the alien reminds me of scooby doo! :)
its good!

Minstrels
09-01-2009, 12:59 PM
Love it!

minun200
09-01-2009, 04:29 PM
I was gonna say this was based on the book Soul Eater...
Anyway, I like the human one the best.
:]

Boonzeet
09-01-2009, 05:50 PM
http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk213/ZomgAnime/Anime%20Series%20P-T/Soul-Eater.jpg

Rombix
12-01-2009, 12:50 PM
Human souleater looks so good :)

nice one

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