APC (Armoured Personal Carrier)

[Revis]

Right, When I did the troopers I said I would make a Humvee, instead I made an APC (Armoured Personal Carrier). It still doesn't look right/good, but I can't think of any more ways to improve it :s So your input would be HUGELY appreciated. I set out making this with a goal of getting it to leets, and I have failed miserably, Oh well. Enjoy.
http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/342/apv6ng.png
Edited:
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/3382/apv0tj.png
Another Edit:
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/8180/apv5po.png
Last Edit:
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/6033/apv6re.png

[Craig]

omg that rocks ELITES ELITES 10/10 :)

[Y!]

So far so good, needs improving. Try to add some more detail, 8/10.

[Mr.Kylee]

Uff there's not enough shading. Alot more shading and details :) 8/10 good job thought.


Edit; I was talking about the tank btw :p

[Revis]

I know it needs more shading and details, but where, I think thats the only problem i'm having with it is knowing where to add the detail. Even trusty google has failed me :s

Sorter Fixed it:
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/3382/apv0tj.png
Better?
Base \/
http://www.armytrucks.com/image/v100.jpg

[Craig]

still elites i would say 10/10 :)

[Revis]

I don't think its worth Elites by a long way, but I'm much happier with the new one.

[Roboevil]

I think it has potential to be elites. Anything can end up elites, it's just matter of opinion. Finish it first though ;).

[Trunto]

Looks good, 9/10. I would give rep but I can't give it for 24 hours. :(

[Mr.Sam]

good so far

i see you placed the troops int he way of the wheels :D

[Travellers]

10/10 very nice.

[Revis]

i see you placed the troops int he way of the wheels :D
:D One less harder job to do =]

[iAdam]

great work but i find if u have a picture of a humvee next to u you can make it perfect and also the troops are blockin the wheels i'd have them on top of vehicle or somthin like that 10/10 add rep keep it up

[com-bat]

hey would you give permison for me to edit it abit

[StripedTiger]

o0o0o0o0o0 thats great and fab! 10/10

[Revis]

hey would you give permison for me to edit it abit
Sorry but no, i want to try and get it as perfect as i can.

Yet Another Edit:
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/8180/apv5po.png

[Xero]

Sorry.. but i hate it. the shapes basic, the inside back lines on edges poking out should be light, not black, the windows should be see through and have a shine, the shadings messed cause you have no light source, and it needs detail, PROPER detail. The detail you have is just a half-assed attempt to try and get it done quickly. Spend more time on your art if you want something decent. Your better off starting again from scratch, and spending ALOT more time on it.

[Revis]

Cheers for your input Xero, I'll try and fix myself a light source, maybe curve the top right hand corner and re-do the front, I'll see what I can do with the black lines.

[Mr.Kylee]

Cheers for your input Xero, I'll try and fix myself a light source, maybe curve the top right hand corner and re-do the front, I'll see what I can do with the black lines.
Delete messages in your PM space can't reply ;) and you'll see my opinion in the message. *sorry for going off topic*

[Revis]

Yeah i'm doing that now. *Back on topic* Yeah, cheers for that Kyle, I'm trying to change it now.
Last edit for the 2 Mr Kyle's and Xero. Sorter fixed it, still need to reshape teh front though.
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/6033/apv6re.png

[Kekea]

Looks good, needs more shading though

[Revis]

MORE SHADING! Where? theres tonnes of shading??

[flame]

ooo very nice :eusa_clap :eusa_clap 8/10 :D

[Revis]

I Just need to reput the cammo on then I'm gonna leave this, cheers for feedback.

[Xero]

I don't think ill make any moe crits cause i crit a bit too hard for people just doing habbo alts :P But.. there is one thing.. atm it looks like its made from cardboard, if its metal, try and give it shine, if you don't know how, look at some tutorials... or some other peoples art involving vehicles and metals and stuff.. I suggest you have a look at corbyns tank at bobbanet.com also.

[HallavousSquall]

That's pretty damn nice man! good job!

If I were you i'd put the scratches that were on the top in v3 back in v4.

[Revis]

I don't think ill make any moe crits cause i crit a bit too hard for people just doing habbo alts :P But.. there is one thing.. atm it looks like its made from cardboard, if its metal, try and give it shine, if you don't know how, look at some tutorials... or some other peoples art involving vehicles and metals and stuff.. I suggest you have a look at corbyns tank at bobbanet.com also.
Crit is always welcome, since yours is often extremely helpfull, I like the metal effect on the scratches, but I don't want it to look new, i want it to look used. I had Corbyns tank open in paint whilst I was doing it and lookin closely at it. I'll probs just do a few more habbo alts and go back to non-habbo work. Cheers dude.

[Noble]

Sheesh, very detailed indeed. I like it alot. 9/10.

[Adam$]

I enjoy this particular piece of splendid artwork. The fine detail included on this masterpiece is most fantastic, and I would like to say that one did a jolly good job of it. Totally spiffing. One gives full marks for this outstanding piece of work. Tally-ho!

[BOGD4N]

pretty kewl

[Revis]

I enjoy this particular piece of splendid artwork. The fine detail included on this masterpiece is most fantastic, and I would like to say that one did a jolly good job of it. Totally spiffing. One gives full marks for this outstanding piece of work. Tally-ho!
Lmao Adam, you out hunting on Sunday? if you aint I need to phone the huntsmaster and tell him, He's not taking kindly to people who don't show up.

[Shadowrock!]

more detail needed
7/10

[Revis]

On which versian Shadow dude?

[Shadowrock!]

nvm, looks good now =)

[Xero]

Crit is always welcome, since yours is often extremely helpfull, I like the metal effect on the scratches, but I don't want it to look new, i want it to look used. I had Corbyns tank open in paint whilst I was doing it and lookin closely at it. I'll probs just do a few more habbo alts and go back to non-habbo work. Cheers dude.

And theres your problem, metal still has shine, whether its old or new, if you want it old, give it some rust!

[Adam$]

I would like to congratulate you on your piece of artwork by giving one reputation. Pip-pip.

[Revis]

Jolly Good Show Old Boy. I'm working on the last 2 edits atm.