Valentines Ride

[EmoGilly]

Made this quite a while back actually, possibly last year, thought that, since its near valentines day, its the perfect time to post it :D

http://img.habboupload.com/1233354138.png

I also made a halloween version if you want too see.

http://img.habboupload.com/1233354177.png

Then a random slight edit to it.

http://img.habboupload.com/1233354222.png

[PaintYourTarget]

The boats lack detail and depth. Make the sides a bit thicker, maybe add chairs and the barriers to stop people falling out and try and clear up the black lines - replace them with Highlights on the inside edges.

The shading on the Tunnel is a bit stark as well. The dithering is amazing and works but I think it should be a tad more subtle and continued along the tunnel. Maybe also add some depth to those paper thin walls too.

The water could also do with some more texture.

On the plus side, I absolutely love the line art of the Goo Monster and Heart tunnel.

[Jordan:A]

wow cool
+rep

[Zeus]

Thats amazing.

[Japan]

why do the boats in the halloween ride have a heart on them?

[Alkaz]

Very nice, and ye, the boat and water arent that great. Also, on the second one why the Heart tunnel shape? + The bats are at the wrong angle. Good work though.

[EmoGilly]

I couldnt think of anything to go on the back apart from a tombstone, but i thought that was way to common and boring. Also my mate asked me to do a corpses bride type thing, so i kept it with the heart AND the fact im too lazy haha.

[Shcl]

I think thats amazing

[Con]

I like it, just you used too many black lines and non of the people have shadows? :S
This definitely isn't one of your best pieces but I like it anyway. :)

[valentineark]

i hate the idea that you made the halloween tunnel in the shape of a heart and also the boat, it would have been different from the valentintine, nice work tho all in all

[Accipiter]

i hate the idea that you made the halloween tunnel in the shape of a heart and also the boat, it would have been different from the valentintine, nice work tho all in all

Its better than ripping.

And much more creative.