I fell, she missed me.

[Jordulti]

Take my hand,
I fell for you,
You let go,
I know it's true,
I love you,
Baby giving it all away for you,
But now it's failed,
And all is done,
You just thought,
I did it for fun,
So now as I,
Take the leap,
You realise,
You've fell for me deep,
Hey, Alarmclock, it's donesday,
Wake up, it's monday.
So now I realised,
It's just a dream,
What you think cannot be,
I know for a fact, for I can see,
Anything you do, amazes me.
So I hear the doctors, and my mother,
She's touching my face and crying,
I see you from a distance, back towards the street,
Walking away, from my defeat,
And in this all, what do I feel?
Deceit? Failure, or your pure conceit.
Now in time as I reach out,
You grab my hand without a doubt,
And in the words, of Martin Luther King Jr.
I say, I cry, I scream.
I have a dream...
I see defeat, I wish, I know,
Someday, for when you let go,
This will all become a reality,
And when your falling as hard for me, as I did for you.
I'm there, Not gone, I catch you.


I wrote that for the girl I love. But she just keeps asking WHY I love her. I hope that made her understand when she found it at her doorstep yesterday.

[FlyingJesus]

What .

[Jordulti]

Basic.

I love girl.
Girl Likes me.
Girl has mixed feelings.
Girl kisses me in front of 200 people while im covered in popcorn.
Girl ignores me for a month.
I write this poem, and leave it on her doorsteps,
now she confesses she has some sort've feelings.

[Cyndia]

well if she confessed she has feelings after you left the poem, it worked!
i've always had a huge amount of respect for guys that are courageous enough to write poetry for a girl. +rep to you for that :)

[ReviewDude]

I have to say, from experience, a girl who asks a guy why he loves her is either one of two things: Low self-esteem, or doesn't like you, but wants a bit of an ego trip. If you tell someone that you love them, and instead of 'I love you too', they say 'Why?', it's probably a sign :P

However, most girls go ga-ga for poetry, hopefully it works out for the best :)

[Jordulti]

Thanks ahah, I put a lot of time into that.

[5,5]

thats actually a really good poem, hopefullly itll work.

[beccyyy]

Oh right.
After I first read that I thought you were one of those ceepy guys that just stalks a girl without knowing her.
But then I saw your other post =]
Its really sweet, if shes confused or something she'll probably know how she feels after the poem
And she does aparantly ?
Well done lol

[Jordulti]

She's hinting at semi on friday we will talk and make out and is talking about doing the whole in the birds & bees thing .

[leah]

Take my hand,
I fell for you,
You let go,
I know it's true,
I love you,
Baby giving it all away for you,
But now it's failed,
And all is done,
You just thought,
I did it for fun,
So now as I,
Take the leap,
You realise,
You've fell for me deep,
Hey, Alarmclock, it's donesday,
Wake up, it's monday.
So now I realised,
It's just a dream,
What you think cannot be,
I know for a fact, for I can see,
Anything you do, amazes me.
So I hear the doctors, and my mother,
She's touching my face and crying,
I see you from a distance, back towards the street,
Walking away, from my defeat,
And in this all, what do I feel?
Deceit? Failure, or your pure conceit.
Now in time as I reach out,
You grab my hand without a doubt,
And in the words, of Martin Luther King Jr.
I say, I cry, I scream.
I have a dream...
I see defeat, I wish, I know,
Someday, for when you let go,
This will all become a reality,
And when your falling as hard for me, as I did for you.
I'm there, Not gone, I catch you.


I wrote that for the girl I love. But she just keeps asking WHY I love her. I hope that made her understand when she found it at her doorstep yesterday.
omgg cute :D:D

[Nicola]

That's so cute :O:D

[mikegoodboy2009]

REMOVED.

[luce]

omgg cute :D:D

Get a grip baby

[Sexy]

its a really good poem tbh :)
maybe i'll start writing poems for the girl i love ;)

[e5]

That's a good poem :O.

I wouldn't do that thing just incase it embarrased me or she doesn't take it well :(.

[Bun]

god dammit, why didn't i read this thread before valentines day :@:@:@

[Jordulti]

Haha! Might of helped!

[Jord]

she might think your a stalker

EDIT: Just looked at last posted soz...

[iAdam]

Just out of interest, how did it go?

[beth]

oh jeez.
just talk to her man, don't need these riddles.

[.Zi]

can I use tat poem?? it was greaat.//

Hope it all works out!