View Full Version : [Building] HAFTAs - Transformers
dbgtz
03-03-2009, 09:58 PM
err the scene is where hes looking for those glasses, but I chose the scene after I made it. I tried to make optimus prime normal but epic fail and well bumblebee was just hard...
Anyway views?
http://uploadpicz.com/images/GFZ2GFJ.png (http://uploadpicz.com)
P.S. if youre an idiot theyre in vehicle form.
IanBRAP
03-03-2009, 10:25 PM
its ok 6½/10 id say MAYBE a 7.
Hazza
03-03-2009, 10:26 PM
awful,
too plain sorry.
Ummmm, the room looks ok 6/10
billyk
03-03-2009, 10:35 PM
conceptually, this is way freaking cool.
Take out the flowers and give the room a nighttime tint, make the lights a little stronger and put stars maybe.
(you can mask the undetailed-ness with the illusion of a blurry night scene, but highlight the awesome part of the room [optimus] by making him bright)
Immenseman
03-03-2009, 10:50 PM
I like the originality and the idea is wicked some bits are just a bit boring. Decent room though, good luck mate.
Cornelius
03-03-2009, 10:56 PM
Was hoping for a transformers room :)
Optimus is the best, so focus the room more on that part like what billyk said.
Overall, with a little remodeling, 7/10. Very nice xD
Hazza
03-03-2009, 10:56 PM
its gd idea.
badly made basically.
Ardemax
04-03-2009, 07:01 AM
wd tom
it's nice!
mlp16
04-03-2009, 05:51 PM
its gd idea.
badly made basically.
I think it is a fantastic room Welldone! And it is not badly made..
8/10 just touch up around the edges :P
It's really nice, just try spreading out the plants. :)
TopManTim
04-03-2009, 06:10 PM
basically just do what billy said :lol:
and maybe add some more plants
dbgtz
06-03-2009, 09:17 PM
http://uploadpicz.com/images/N5BLB6A.png (http://uploadpicz.com)
probs just made it worse...
what landscape should I use?
-iBraderz
06-03-2009, 10:24 PM
I Actually Realy Like This Design.
It Could Also Be Improved By ore Detail?
Yours,
Bradley
-iBraderz
08-03-2009, 03:51 PM
Use like A City Landscape.
shizzle
11-03-2009, 06:55 PM
The second is better, but I don't like it, 6/10. I remember that scene lol.
Scotesh
13-03-2009, 12:19 PM
I like the originality and the idea is wicked some bits are just a bit boring. Decent room though, good luck mate.
Agreed.
Pyroka
13-03-2009, 02:31 PM
City Landscape and some grey flooring would be much better.
decent attempt actually,
some things to improve:
walls look slightly too plain (maybe add some windows etc)
a moodlight would do wonders here.
the scaling is a bit ooft.
also stacking in a big room doesn't look brilliant so you maybe perhaps should have kept re-entering the room/rotating the bits that stick out till its all perfect then screenied.
and theres a fountain in the middle of the road or am i just imagining things?
i think a few of the drain furni from habboween would have good here too :)
i like the little fire thing coming out of optimus and the colour scheme so well done.
6/10 (for the characters)
3/10 (for the room)
dbgtz
13-03-2009, 11:47 PM
look at screenie above
plus i fail because i forgot to enter :(
Nice work its an creative idea. 6/10
Japan
15-03-2009, 08:30 AM
Add some skyscraper windows?
And the room does a look a bit plain, but it's a very original Idea =D
+Rep
Darn gotta wait 24 hours >:l
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