Wii alt!

[Habboish]

http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t8/Bar27262/untitled-19.jpg





NOTICE:I didnt have spare time to make a WIP Due to Lunch.

[Kyle]

looks awful sorry

[Habboish]

looks awful sorry


What are the flaws?

[Kyle]

What are the flaws?
you want me to list all of them? I'll be here all day y'know...

- It's jpeg ~ save as png next time (or gif if you make it transparent)

- The lines are jagged

- You've posted it in the wrong section ~ Well... you posted in non habbo graphics too but after you posted it in here... Why two threads? Just report your post and ask for it to be moved!

- There's BARELY ANY shading on it ~ add more shades to give depth to the piece as well as making it look more like the original.

- The inside lines a black ~ This is not a good look, add a light source to the piece and color the inside lines according to where the light is. If it's facing away from the light make the line slightly darker than the fill color; if it's facing towards the light, make it slightly lighter than the fill

[Kyle]

double posted *woops*

[dbgtz]

It's worse then your world trade centre

[Kipp]

Looks terrible, sorry. I just don't like it to be honest.

[ChrisObv]

I like it,
yes theres flaws, but they can be ironed out?

[Sameer!]

Okay I guess?

[ilovepie]

Thats quite cute :D
Even though its not perfect, its good.
I like it :)

[Parable.]

Its a good attempt, so well done for that.

Just take some of the comments received and take it as constructive feedback rather then criticism and insults. :)

[thorn]

1. You dont make WIPS.. You just save it during the making of it?

[flatface]

Its abit rough on the edges, but nice try :D

[Mario]

1. You dont make WIPS.. You just save it during the making of it?

Theres a thing called overwriting
-.-

[Four]

is that meant to look anything like habbo?

[e5]

its all wonky :S
and the writing especially.

[Mr-Trainor]

Definately not perfect but a good attempt! :)

[Parable.]

:D


keep it up

[Four]

:rolleyes:


give it up

i agree

[Ardemax]

I like it,
yes theres flaws, but they can be ironed out?


that's the whole point of critism

and it's not very good because the lines are all weird

[Pienesse]

i want one >:P

[Jord]

Its nice :D

[:odey:]

I think its not too bad? :)

Nothing thats not too hard to fix :) 6/10 for now,

But, its in the wrong section? :)