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-iBraderz
14-03-2009, 05:42 PM
This is my Sea palace for the room competition starting on Monday, Please can you give me a rating out of 10 and how I can improve!
Hope you like it,

Brad (:

http://i44.tinypic.com/i4o9hk.jpg

-iBraderz
14-03-2009, 05:43 PM
& I know the photo is'nt the best quality.


Edited by Yoshimitsui (Forum Super Moderator): Please do not make multiple posts, simply edit your previous.

Anvrew
14-03-2009, 05:46 PM
You have to do a before one too jtlyk :lol:

Whats with the anchors though?
7/10

-iBraderz
14-03-2009, 05:50 PM
If you read,
This is for monday.
Its just the underwater ones :s

Lgq
14-03-2009, 05:51 PM
You have to do a before one too jtlyk :lol:

Whats with the anchors though?
7/10

he doesn't have to do one on land, that's a different competition
wd on room I like it :)

dogboy123
14-03-2009, 05:52 PM
Nice room :)

Gl with the comp

and save the file as .png next time :)

Anvrew
14-03-2009, 05:52 PM
oh sorry, goodluck

-iBraderz
14-03-2009, 05:54 PM
Thanks David,
Thanks for th advice Dogboy
Anvrew Thanks (:

Kipp
14-03-2009, 06:56 PM
Nice room, I like it.

Ardemax
14-03-2009, 07:13 PM
most of it is from your james bond room which i don't like

Jordan:A
14-03-2009, 07:16 PM
Just one thing, when is there a butler underwater ?

Myth
14-03-2009, 07:36 PM
Not bad nice room you got there. 7/10 Good work.

-iBraderz
14-03-2009, 09:59 PM
Oh im sorry ardemax, i never thought i could re-use furniture and maybe use the same size ;s

And theres a butler in there because its a palace and its my immagination, Most palace you see on habbo would have butlers in ;s

You guys ahve gotta learn im under 6month cat. ;l

Jord
15-03-2009, 02:24 AM
Looks nice :)

Japan
15-03-2009, 08:14 AM
Its nice =D
+Rep =)

-iBraderz
15-03-2009, 09:39 AM
Thanks <3

Faboosh
15-03-2009, 09:46 AM
i like it :)
good luck

Ardemax
15-03-2009, 06:49 PM
Oh im sorry ardemax, i never thought i could re-use furniture and maybe use the same size ;s

And theres a butler in there because its a palace and its my immagination, Most palace you see on habbo would have butlers in ;s

You guys ahve gotta learn im under 6month cat. ;l


nono, don't be sorry it's my fault, i put it into a difficult context...
stop re-using rooms

-iBraderz
17-03-2009, 04:52 PM
Lol Hilarious :|

Verrou
18-03-2009, 11:18 AM
What's with the blue rugs? Representing water underwater?????

Casanova
18-03-2009, 11:29 AM
I don't like it, no offence but it's pretty simple. I like old skool simple - now-a-days you're expected to be extravagant and adventurous. I can't really give you any improvement advice though. I'm **** at building rooms :).

-iBraderz
18-03-2009, 08:59 PM
Hmm,
Verrou, Its Underwater.
I Thought Id add Like A Lake Kind Of Theme, As It Did Used To Be A Village.
Completly UnderStand Were Your Coming From.
Has Been Updated, Thanks <3

Casanova,
Im sorry but i dont know what you think simple is, I thought this was a complex design? If your not so good at bulding rooms yourself, Please dotn give negative comments in future (:

TopManTim
19-03-2009, 05:17 PM
Hmm,
Verrou, Its Underwater.
I Thought Id add Like A Lake Kind Of Theme, As It Did Used To Be A Village.
Completly UnderStand Were Your Coming From.
Has Been Updated, Thanks <3

Casanova,
Im sorry but i dont know what you think simple is, I thought this was a complex design? If your not so good at bulding rooms yourself, Please dotn give negative comments in future (:


What's your problem? You're so snappy when someone says they don't like it.

Maybe you should take criticism on board and thus improve the room instead of saying you can't make rooms = your opinion doesn't matter like you've basically said.

Ardemax is right - the room is basically just the James Bond room but with underwater stuff added and for that reason I don't like it, I hate re-used rooms. I doubt you even moved any of the greek and other items used in James Bond room.

Also, using the excuse I'm in the 6months category is pathetic. If you're expecting to suddenly be able to make better rooms when you're 1year+ you've got another thing coming. To make better rooms you'll need to learn to take criticism on board like I've said and then improve the room with suggestions you've recieved.


P.S. By the use of simple I think Casanova means there's no stacking, the thought of a palace is simple and re-using rooms is simple and easy.

cyberchris
20-03-2009, 09:40 PM
The bensalem comps fail anyway, why bother entering? lol

-iBraderz
20-03-2009, 11:18 PM
I dont know chris,

& Tim, I can face facts. I have actual updated my palace. (:x

Ardemax
21-03-2009, 11:05 AM
You've Actually Stopped Talking Like This Omg It's So Great


and erm what could you update in the first place? you were so proud..

Fivas
23-03-2009, 12:21 AM
Nice room brad, also you commented on my gb not that long ago
-shrivvle wave :D

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