Bloodkane's "2005" Poems.

[Bloodkanekiller]

I'm not going to lie, if you see some of my threads about my poems you can see 4 Years ago I was really rubbish and I couldnt spell and
some of the stuff I said made no sense, well 4 years have past and I've come back to see if I'm better :).

Looking Into The Eyes, OF A Killer Poem.

Where Am I?
What Do I Do?
My life is forbidden,
My fate is up to you,
Your eyes are looking into me,
I feel your pain,
Are you going to kill me?
Or are you trying to restrain.
I see you don't want to do this,
Your eyes begin to tear,
I can feel the intensity,
I can feel your fear.

Why are you doing this?
What Have I done,
Do you think real life is a game,
and are you doing this for fun.
I'm looking into the eyes,
and I'm witnessing my own murder,
As my life flashes infront of me,
as the man pulls the "trigger".

Hope you enjoyed :), and basically the ending is where the man who is talking about this poem, is basically killed.

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[ItsDave]

Wrong forum section lol. Not rly funny or a video, but nevertheless, its pretty good.

[Kyle!]

Quite a good poem but still a lot of grammatical errors.

[Bun]

lol freak.

[buttons]

lol freak.
lolirl
i actually quite like it tho, depressin but kl

[Bloodkanekiller]

I tried to make the poem emotional, and make it into the eyes of a man who is scared and frightend and can see the murder is messed in the head but sadly the Murderer kills the man :(.