The Room thing i made..

[Bekii]

well this is my first ever try at doing anything.. and its my first post on habboxforum, i drew this room thing.. and.. i know bits are really bad but it took me hours. It took me about 2 days, please rate out of ten for me and tell me things what i can improve :D p.s. i dont know how this will turn out, and right not im trying to figure how to get the picture onto this post.. because it doesnt seem to like me. ive been trying for about half an hour now.. xD im going to try this thing.. i have no idea what im doing so if it goes terribly wrong i will try to get the picture on here for you.. (this is 2 attempts) xD
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