Part of my Street Racing Design Comp

[iTweedz]

Here is the group page part of the final design comp for the habapprentice thing, havent attempted anything like this before so please dont slate it =[

Construtive criticism is welcomed :eusa_danc

Also I trust no one will steal so ya know.

http://img.habboupload.com/1239628553.png

[:odey:]

Haha that is pretty awesome xD

Why is there a guy sat on top of someone? xD

And you could of made the roads fit together a little more smoothly :)

Apart from that, its good :)

[Sixiz]

lmao i lov the 2 girls waving at the end, rofl made me lol :)

[Con]

No Shadows??
For the road, you could of at elast removed the black lines indicating each piece of furniture :P
It looks like there is probably too much as there wont be much room for text?

But nice job anyway.

[VelvetClover]

I like this a lot, well done! :)

[Kipp]

I like it, personally I think it looks awesome. Nice

[DPS]

Not being funny, but when did police do street racing?

[Portish]

Haha, that is very good Alex.

[iTweedz]

Thanks for the comments im gonna change some of it like some of you have said.

Also look in the police car and you see a chav/thief type character.

[GoldenMerc]

Not being funny, but when did police do street racing?
watch the new fast and furious and you will see, its really good Alex!

[iTwist]

Looks great. But not good on the road, where I can see you've C+P'ed :)

[Moogels]

Is that guy at the table taking bets? lol. Good Job!

[Joshuarr]

Its really good, as other people have said you should merge the roads to make it look less C&P-ish.. Also, I think you should change the colour of the pad of stickies on the table from Yellow to Pink.. As in pink slips, Ya' know?
Other than that, its quite clean :)

[iTweedz]

I really want to change the roads as people are saying but its hard as there isnt enough room once the black line is removed to fit another purple square to merge them.

[staace]

the heads turned to the side look a bit odd alex!

[Chancer!!]

Sorry i dont like it. Sorry.

[dbgtz]

good concept but:
-the road patches aren't aligned properly
-lotssssssss of c+p
-no shading on grass or pavement
-dull in the forest area

Love the way u like set it out though

[valentineark]

lol, the place where the audience are is a bit random, wat is a man doing ontop of another man xD COME ON?!

[Hazza]

You won :D
Could u post fulllllllllll? please.

[Jake145]

I really want to change the roads as people are saying but its hard as there isnt enough room once the black line is removed to fit another purple square to merge them.

Well i managed to do it ok, here i've uploaded it. I've only done 1 row just to show you its possible.

http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x281/Jake145_2007/Tada.png

[martial-law]

no offence, but how on earth did this win? O_O

maybe the final edit was better.... :S

[valentineark]

congrats on winning m8, if you dont mind could you post your final images here? thanx :)

[iTweedz]

There were far far far better entries so how the hell I won me dont know.

But heres my final images.

Background:
http://img.habboupload.com/1239751271.png

Billboard 1:
http://img.habboupload.com/1239751319.png

Billboard 2:
http://img.habboupload.com/1239751342.png

Advert thing:
http://img.habboupload.com/1239751391.png

Top Story:
http://img.habboupload.com/1239751418.png

Sticker:
http://img.habboupload.com/1239751716.png

Badge:
http://img.habboupload.com/1239751499.gif

3 Stickers:
http://img.habboupload.com/1239751637.png

[Hazza]

How did you win? Sorry but I've seen much better ^_^.

[iTweedz]

How did you win? Sorry but I've seen much better ^_^.

Its funny ive been asking my self the exact same thing. :S

[Hazza]

Well done never the less, I find it funny that the hardest task got the worst prize? Does not make one bit of sense to me. :S

[valentineark]

habbo are dizzy blud, but do you know why I think you won? your the only person with the kind of good campaign that folllowed the rules EXACTLY unlike all the other emogilly, i glitch, me etc

[dogboy123]

I really like it, well done.

I think their heads look a bit wierd completely turned to the side

but goood :D

[leah]

That's really good :P

[Warmness]

Besides that it has no shadows, I do not like the money on the table, try fixing those besides that the c and p and some recolors are good.

[Faytal]

Well done, nice alts :)