Who wants to see my first alt?

[Brandon101]

Yes I know I have made a RECOLOUR before; but this is my first alt.

Please don't be to harsh, Constructive criticism would be helpful.

http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/9832/1stalt.png (http://img8.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1stalt.png)

[Kipp]

Sorry if this sounds harsh, but for your first alt it doesn't look that good. It looks like you've only added extra hair.

[Gem.]

I've seen worse first alts.. but yeah it could be better.

[Cherri]

Yes I know I have made a RECOLOUR before; but this is my first alt.

Please don't be to harsh, Constructive criticism would be helpful.

http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/9832/1stalt.png (http://img8.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1stalt.png)

1. I see it had pants, and then it was turned to reallly HUGE armstrings and legs.
2. The hair is okay, it could look better.
3. What is up with the pants and the chest?
4. Is she in a night gown?

Err... I don't wanna be harsh so I'll give you 6/10 for trying.

[Casio]

Errr what she said ^^

[VelvetClover]

It's okay for a first try but you could have made the clothes more interesting I think.