Computer desk

[Casio]

Following what dada did with his Nooby Desk i came up with this

http://img.habboupload.com/1241382100.png

Credit to dada for the idea etc

[iCicada]

Could I edit that a little?

[Refocus]

Following what dada did with his Nooby Desk i came up with this

http://img.habboupload.com/1241382100.png

Credit to dada for the idea etc

Not sure if you pull it off as well as dada tbh but it's a good effort :] Adding to it will improve it (Y)

[VelvetClover]

Looks good to me :)

[Casio]

Could I edit that a little?

Yea sure go ahead


Not sure if you pull it off as well as dada tbh but it's a good effort :] Adding to it will improve it (Y)

yea i thought that aswell, what else can be added ?

[iTweedz]

Its nice, but a bit unsure whether it would suit habbo.

Maybe it would suit another site or something but it isnt really pixilated for a Habbo Alt.

[Refocus]

Yea sure go ahead



yea i thought that aswell, what else can be added ?


I was thinking scattered papers/paperweight/drink(?)/phone or maybe building on it a little, like adding more to it constructionally, make the sides into private study area things, like it has 2 sides and a top =] Hope you know what I mean, I'm not very good at explaining lol. Just general stuff :D

@iTweedz, I agree it wouldn't look quite right on habbo. It's still good as something made from scratch in paint though.

[Casio]

Heres is the second version

With cork board:
http://img.habboupload.com/1241532805.png

Without cork board:
http://img.habboupload.com/1241532850.png

[Refocus]

Heres is the second version

With cork board:
http://img.habboupload.com/1241532805.png

Without cork board:
http://img.habboupload.com/1241532850.png

That's a whole lot better! The part facing us however needs to be a different shade and the rest of the shading may need some tweaking but +rep for this :]

[Casio]

Thanks for that Refocus the rep will be returned but how else can it be improved what sort of tweaking is needed

[Urnuph]

the middle part (the bit directly facing us) doesn't seem quite right to me, and i'm not sure why... it just doesn't look right. It might possibly not be isometric or aligned correctly. maybe somebody else will know why, as im not completely sure

[Kipp]

Nice, I like it. +REP

[lew!]

I like the concept of it, I think you should make the desk a bit more thicker or realistic as it seems a bit thin. Also, I think it looks a bit odd the fact its on a diagonal, if it was more square it might look better?

[Refocus]

the middle part (the bit directly facing us) doesn't seem quite right to me, and i'm not sure why... it just doesn't look right. It might possibly not be isometric or aligned correctly. maybe somebody else will know why, as im not completely sure

Yes the middle part needs to be a darker shade, it is isometric, however it is one pixel to the right more than it is too the left, and there are several pixel errors with the top line as highlighted here:

http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa78/refocus/Deskpixelerrors.png

These are quite common mistakes but once one pixel is out of place in a line the rest doesn't usually come together accurately and thus you have a few, but I wouldn't worry about them. Sometimes they are easy to fix but if gone unnoticed they can be a real pain the backside, I know from experience :eusa_wall:eusa_wall:eusa_wall

As for the shading, I'm not sure what else to suggest, I did notice the left side is exactly the same shade as the right almost like a mirror goes down the middle, so idk maybe you could try some things that differentiate the sides :] The middle part looks ok with the same shade as the 2 sides that are next to it, I've tried.

[Casio]

Thanks for all the replys +rep returned and here is next version errors fixed and shaded a touch

http://img.habboupload.com/1241633200.png

Old:
http://img.habboupload.com/1241532850.png

[Lee]

Great alt, but it could be improved more :) Keep working at it :D

[benzinie]

this 1 looks better

[Casio]

Great alt, but it could be improved more :) Keep working at it :D

Thanks and also what can be improved ?


this 1 looks better

What one looks better

[Meti]

Looks good :)

[-iBraderz]

Nice idea,
To finsish it, add pencils and a laptop to it :)

[Cutter]

looks sweet

+REP

[Casio]

looks sweet

+REP

Thanks will be returned when i receive it

[OhLiam]

Haha that's good, you need to darken the sides facing us, its like the sides merge with the top lol, but other than that it's awesome.

http://img.habboupload.com/1242501754.png

[Gardevoir]

That's awesome, I wish I could do something like that. I'd rep but y'know... no rep power.

[Dark]

Don't know if anyone's mentioned it yet,
But this is in the wrong area of the forum.

[eight]

Don't know if anyone's mentioned it yet,
But this is in the wrong area of the forum.

No Its not

[Dark]

No Its not

It should be in "Habbo Furni Alterations", should it not?

[Refocus]

It should be in "Habbo Furni Alterations", should it not?

:S

Probably, but I don't really think it's going to cause mass hysteria over something being in a wrong sub-forum over a very similar sub-sub-forum.

[Japan]

Wow thats actually very nice =D