SP Entry. Wii Love Habbo

[Quork]

http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t30/Quork33/WiiLoveHabbo.png

I'm kind of a noob to alterations, but tell me what you guys think :P

Thread closed by Jordan (Forum Super Moderator): Due to bump

[Casio]

Sorry.


Edited by ,Jess, (Forum Super Moderator): Please do not make pointless posts.

[Chaos]

Personally if i saw that in the shop id buy it. ;)

[dannii.]

I like it and yeah, I would probably buy it :]
But all I could say is that in some places it doesn't look like it is saved in a good format.
But other than that, I love it.

[thorn]

Your C+P'd it all! So basically not your work.

[Kyle]

Your C+P'd it all! So basically not your work.
^ hypocracy at its finest everybody ^

Sorry Quork but it's actually pretty damn awful; you've simply chucked a few images onto a bland background and proclaimed that it is an alt. The shrunken love heart and stretched text "HABBO" don't really do anything for this, looks tacky actually. If I saw this in a shop I'd think that it was a joke.

[luce]

Erm it's ok i spose not sure i'd buy it when i could just play online for free lol

[-leestrong-]

It's a nice alteration. (:

[Jordan:A]

the corner looks a little blury

[e5]

the corner looks a little blury
Dont like the top bit, as said by Jordan :).

[Quork]

Well, I appreciate all of the criticism and comments. I'm not a master pixel artist, and while yes some bits are copy-pasted, I did do some myself.
I doubt anyone will, but I'd just like to remind people not to rip. They will take you down if accused, plus, I have work in progress photos as proof that it was made by myself. Regardless, I'm going to enter it in the competition and see how it does.

[RandomManJay]

It could have been worse, but there are a lot of faults to it, for example:

- The habbo title is warped out of proportion.
- The Wii icon and the icon on the bottom right is similar to the title.
- You don't really need the love heart with the word love on it.
- You don't need the orange wii symbol just above the heart as you already know its for the Wii considering it says it on the box.
- The 'Where Anything's Possible' motto at the bottom looks like it's been saved as a JPEG, then added on afterwards.

The habbo cover image looks fine though, nicely designed. I know its your first alt, or at least the first on this forum considering this is your first post, so I'll be kind and say it's quite good for a first, but try work on some of the faults and post the improvements. Also a word or advice, try to think through the alt and think what would others say about and try to fix it up before you post it, it could save you time and effort in the future.

[Quork]

It could have been worse, but there are a lot of faults to it, for example:

- The habbo title is warped out of proportion.
- The Wii icon and the icon on the bottom right is similar to the title.
- You don't really need the love heart with the word love on it.
- You don't need the orange wii symbol just above the heart as you already know its for the Wii considering it says it on the box.
- The 'Where Anything's Possible' motto at the bottom looks like it's been saved as a JPEG, then added on afterwards.

The habbo cover image looks fine though, nicely designed. I know its your first alt, or at least the first on this forum considering this is your first post, so I'll be kind and say it's quite good for a first, but try work on some of the faults and post the improvements. Also a word or advice, try to think through the alt and think what would others say about and try to fix it up before you post it, it could save you time and effort in the future.

I appreciate the helpful criticism. I guess the Habbo logo does need some work. But the Wii name there is neccesary. The game is called Wii Love Habbo. Lol. As in "We Love Habbo"
But thanks, I'll see if I can improve.

[VelvetClover]

It's good, definately better than anything I could do myself lol

But the Habbo characters, yellow limo etc. just look like some of the Habbo home stickers.

[Blinger1]

Get rid of the LOVE on the heart then it looks good :)

[Verrou]

TBH you can't get a beer anywhere in the hotel. Making the statement "Where anything's possible" false. And it isn't very difficult to C&P some stuff onto a bg. So 2/10 sorry.

[Cherpi]

Sorry i really dont like it, It's just C+P, But well done for trying.. :D

[Jordan:A]

http://img.habboupload.com/1242163105.png (http://www.habboupload.com)
Few faults:
Blue- Looks like shes floating
Red- The man with the green top is supposed to be infront of the man with the purple top ?
Yellow- The camera arm is ontop of the woman

Colour coded so you can understand (:

[maccarox481]

^ hypocracy at its finest everybody ^

Sorry Quork but it's actually pretty damn awful; you've simply chucked a few images onto a bland background and proclaimed that it is an alt. The shrunken love heart and stretched text "HABBO" don't really do anything for this, looks tacky actually. If I saw this in a shop I'd think that it was a joke.


i agree and is any of it not cut and paste?

[Marucho]

It's like 99% C+P so you stand very little chance of winning.
The colours don't match, everyone's floating and it obvious you just cropped a real Wii box because you didn't remove writing down the left hand side.

[Rollerkingdom]

Erm This is not really much work but glad you attempted.
I am pretty much telling the truth but it won't win SP.
You should try to start working on some alts instead of copy and paste
because that makes your chances very low.
Good attempt though but i don't like.

[,Abbey]

I would defo buy this game, imagine Habbo on the Wii, well that's an idea Paul?

Edited by Jordan (Forum Super Moderator): Please do not bump old threads.