Rate and Slate This Jingle?

[Mikey]

http://www.supload.com/listen?s=nPQFC4

sorry if it's on a crappy upload site.

[DjNina]

That's pretty good. You just maybe need some effects...to mix the music up so it sounds better but other than that 7/10

[Andys]

cant understand ur accent much

[CustardCurse]

LOL you didnt make that mixdown its on RadioDaddy!!! www.wrowejingles.co.uk (http://www.wrowejingles.co.uk) for the best ;)

[Lost]

The music is good :D Where abouts in Scotland are you from?

[GrandTheftAudio]

You should do something like, "Stay tuned into Risble.com for the hottest music from the biggest artists" (I don't know :$). Then have a mix of songs without little intervals saying "and this" but I've seen worse. It's alright, well done. :)

[Mikey]

LOL you didnt make that mixdown its on RadioDaddy!!! www.wrowejingles.co.uk (http://www.wrowejingles.co.uk) for the best ;)

WTH are you on about?
Me and my friend made this jingle for our site :S It's got our voices in it and everything lol

[Mikey]

The music is good :D Where abouts in Scotland are you from?

Glasgow :D
The first two people are my friends who are from Glasgow, then it's me, then a friend from nottingham and then me lol.

[CustardCurse]

yes your voice but that music bed isnt yours

[Mikey]

yes your voice but that music bed isnt yours

what the hell are you talking about, we just took random music from my friends computer. :$ i want proof that it supposedly isn't ours.

[Blinger1]

It doesn't work anyway...?

[user130523]

^ agreed

[Gem.]

Your mics are rubbish.
Plus the way that people voice jingles they emphasise their words?

[HighFlight]

Nice mix, crap mics, the voice at 11seconds is the only decent one in it.

[user130523]

i really didn't like, all you said was 'and this **music** and this' plus as everyone else has said mics arn't that good

[kuzkasate]

Sounds great =] I like it 6.9/10

[hamheyelliot]

The last voice you hear seems like the best, but it should make use of some SFX for some added kick.