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FlyingJesus
25-05-2009, 12:22 AM
Just a single verse I wrote about me being the best ever. It's all true.
If only I could rap.. got a decent beat I could put behind this. Oh well I'm still amazing

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Your Champion

Like a king, swing my scepter
When I bring out my deck, huh,
All aces down for the hand that wrecks ya
Yesterday just a jester
Now rise up the best
'Cause the number one comes with a tongue sprung -
Poised ready to strike it right,
Strike it lucky, strike a light
To lead you to the throne where I'm sat tight
Can't take from me in my time
Numero uno, premiére, the prime,
The best mayne like Eli
We fly over that mountain peak up high
And I spy with my little eye
Something beginning with Y,
Why you gotta deny my rise?
Why supply denials instead of truthful replies?
Why you say the end's nigh? I'm just getting started;
The dear departed of tomorrow are today's faint hearted
Why try to analyse me when I'm off the chart?
Why try to piece me together when I'm above every part?
Your enthusiastic fantastic boss
Like elastic I *ping* back when I get crossed
Sarcastic I gloss every comment you toss
'Cause I been here forever like unfound moss,
Yeah I'm natural, you're plastic; you scrape and I floss,
Make you see fire 'cause my imagery's hot
I'm the white flame heating the black kettle and pot -
Those hypocrites flip a bit but guess they forgot
I'm the will with the way to make a full somersault
And they ain't squat: not a single shot
At my title, so out, damn'd spot!
Hell is murky, old man you bleed so much it can't clot
And what need I fear when the devil is caught?
I'm the G.O.A.T. untethered, yeah, bound by no knot
My empire goes all the way to Sun
I'm the father of a nation and won't be outdone
Next to none, race is run,
Find my place on the podium:
I'm number one.

Mrs.McCall
25-05-2009, 11:11 AM
Haha that was good. It was definatly different.

Btw, Eli? Did you mean Ali?

Catzsy
25-05-2009, 11:18 AM
Very good indeed. Love the attitude and emotions it invokes. Powerful piece.

FlyingJesus
25-05-2009, 01:44 PM
Haha that was good. It was definatly different.

Btw, Eli? Did you mean Ali?

Nah Eli as in Eli Porter, this guy who went on an Iron Mic rap competition and gave us the world's greatest line - "I'm the best mayne, I deed it" as well as the longest ever pause in a freestyle. He's apparently not disabled but I don't believe it.
http://i32.tinypic.com/10i8c4x.jpg
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tKKxPtP6XjQ
should be seen by everyone whether you like rap or hate it :P


Very good indeed. Love the attitude and emotions it invokes. Powerful piece.

Haha yeah I think it'll really reach out to people and show them all the light ^_^

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