Pokémon Alterations In Progress

[Gardevoir]

http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/2623/wip1.png


The actual alteration features a Pokémart, a random building and a Pokécenter. This is version one and I have not added a roof onto the Pokécenter or Pokémart yet. This is the second alteration that I have posted ever since I learned about isometric shapes.

I'd also like to post this by my friend Jack. (Bloodlust,)

http://i441.photobucket.com/albums/qq131/Jackorzkfnx/HabboGold.png

I couldn't fit it into the actual alteration as it was much larger than the other sprites which I made. The next version will have roofs, better text on signs and an improved sidewalk. Possibly more sprites.

Anyway, rate /10. All of the other stuff was made by me from scratch on MS paint. (Other than the Gold alteration)

[Hado1823]

as i am only new to the forums i cant really rate, as i do not know the standard, but from what ive seen its probs one of my favs, nice work dude keep it up

[robdog08]

It's abit, whats the word, cubey :) nice alt though, do some shading and rounding on the corners and you'll find that you may become Elite with this ...

[Mickword]

Yeah its quite good needs more detail and shading but it still good.

My mark: 6/10

[iArch]

I would say 7 - i like the idea

[VelvetClover]

It looks pretty good. I'd like to see it when it's completely finished :)

[Cutter]

Yeah its quite good needs more detail and shading but it still good.

My mark: 6/10


i agree, needs more shading

[Frank459]

I would like to see a zoomed out version of the character if possible, nevertheless the idea is exceptional.

[Kyle]

why are your colors so harsh?
why are the girls feet so deformed if there are perfectly good feed available to copy?
where is the shading?
how can such a small habbo cast such a large shadow?

[Kipp]

7/10. As said in the above post, it needs more shading. On the other hand, the alt looks good.

[Japan]

I agree with everyone else, with a little bit of shading it could look very impressive.
8/10

[Refocus]

You want to fix this before you carry on:
http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa78/refocus/pixelerror2.png

[thorn]

OMG, Make a little Pikachu - or how ever you spell it :D

It could be a Pet! :o

[Describe]

The door handles look terrible.

[Gardevoir]

Eh, if you notice pixel errors on the Gardevoir then they are most likely because I suck at drawing actual Habbos. The errors on the buildings may of occoured because I did the buildings as just a flat isometric square at first and then quickly added the sides later on.

Either case, will be an easy fix. Will post update tommorow or whenever I have 15 posts because this 'moderators must review all posts until 15 posts' rule is stupid and extremely annoying.

[dbgtz]

Sorry but the colours are horrible, the text is revolting, the shading is awful and some objects are awful in size or just eww.
However at least you've grabsed isometric.

[Refocus]

Sorry but the colours are horrible, the text is revolting, the shading is awful and some objects are awful in size or just eww.
However at least you've grabsed isometric.

Actually he's not grasped isometric to a tee.

If you look closely at points where the lines across meet the lines going down, they are all differently proportionate on the same building, some are 3 pixels long and some are 1, this is not following the style of isometric, thus mistakes are bound to happen like on the point I identified above in an earlier post.

You may want to focus on getting the outlines correct before you move onto colouring it in, shading etc. like other people have pointed out. This way if you want to edit an outline it won't be such a pain like it is when it's in a surrounding environment, because it could have a knock on effect to other things, although this is if you want everything to be aligned correctly.

You may want to scrap this one and start again, I would if it were up to me. The idea is brilliant as a concept. Try getting the buildings in the whole of the picture so they are square :] then you can add around the buildings if you wanted making it the whole thing larger as a landscape instead of just cropped picture.

Sorry I'm in essay mode atm, I'll leave it there. :eusa_whis

[Arch]

Id say 7/10
its pretty good ;)

[8KindGirl8]

Good idea and nice avatar . I shall give a 7/10

[Jorc]

It looks pretty good, could add more but nice job anyways!

[Bloodlust,]

I would like to see a zoomed out version of the character if possible, nevertheless the idea is exceptional.

I may work on a smaller version of the Gold Alt..
Depends what time I get, really..