Unfinished Diner

[Cutter]

Hey, i got board so i started a diner, its not finished yet, hope you like it, i'm abit stuck on it so if you can think of anything to go on it feel free to post here or just add it yourself and post it back here.



http://i44.tinypic.com/125pfcx.gif



May be abit big :P

[ExtraKen]

Building looks good althou theres a few errors in the lines.

I think the sign board thing is a bit big for it think it should be smaller in height :)

[Mickword]

It would be good with more things, with your permission could I use the image please?

[Cutter]

yea, sure, i'm looking for new views on it, lol

[VelvetClover]

Nice work. The shadow coming from the billboard thing looks good :)

[Cutter]

Nice work. The shadow coming from the billboard thing looks good :)

cheers :P

[Toom.]

i love it :D

[rokstar]

coming along alright
looking forward to seeing it finished ;)

[Mounta1nGoat]

The left side of the building should be lighter if the billboards shadow is there. It's good so far :). Just remember where your main light source is.

[Cutter]

The left side of the building should be lighter if the billboards shadow is there. It's good so far :). Just remember where your main light source is.


good point :P


and if anyone is going to add anything then don't go wild with it, just add a bit

[Cutter]

changed it from a diner to maybe a shop/pub, not sure


http://i42.tinypic.com/10qc9ig.png

[Kyle]

Always try to remember where your light source(s) are and if there are more than one, show it in the image (I.e. a lamp, torch, street light, etc.)

I see in your image that you have shaded your building, then you have randomly drawn a shadow towards the light source... What's going on there?

It's looking okay though, not the best I've seen but... just... okay.

[Cutter]

re done the the light source and shading, does it look okay or is the shading to much?


http://i44.tinypic.com/2sacdhw.png

[Kyle]

It should be more like this

http://www.iaza.com/work/090620C/hxf2159245.png

As you can see, the shadow stops at the edge, as you don't usually see shadows going into thin air, they will always be on something e.g. floor/wall etc. Also, the sides of the building should be shaded like this instead of the way you have done it, since it was darker on the side of your lightsource where it should have been lighter. Hope this helped.

[kuzkasate]

It should be more like this

http://www.iaza.com/work/090620C/hxf2159245.png

As you can see, the shadow stops at the edge, as you don't usually see shadows going into thin air, they will always be on something e.g. floor/wall etc. Also, the sides of the building should be shaded like this instead of the way you have done it, since it was darker on the side of your lightsource where it should have been lighter. Hope this helped.

Yh, I actually like that remade version because the original was too shadowy!

But overall Cutter, nice work. :)

[Mounta1nGoat]

One question..
Why is the right wall two different shades on either side of the sign? lol

[Cutter]

One question..
Why is the right wall two different shades on either side of the sign? lol

lol, good point, only just noticed that, i had that wall darker at first, but then i changed the light source

[DJDynamix]

Awsome idea, possibly try to add some large windows and have a banner or something?

[Cutter]

cheers, i'm thinking of adding a window

[thorn]

When should we be expecting the complete version?

On-topic: Nice!, But as alot fo people have been saying, make the billboard smaller- maybe add something to the outside walls, Windows? Wanted posters?

Good Work!