layout for my graphics assignment [Archive]

Tooplee

23-06-2009, 09:54 PM

(i'm sloppeh from chf)

Basically, it's for my product which is entitled, 'lunchbox', an organic lunch boxed in recycled card which you can purchase from supermarkets - it comes with a sandwich/salad/pasta and a snack along with a drink. That's basically it really.. I just have to create promotional materials such as a business card, a poster, website design etc.

(those photographs are mine btw, they're not stocksssss)

http://i39.tinypic.com/14cd6wz.png

l3etrayed

23-06-2009, 10:10 PM

Very nice clean design overall. Not sure about the text used on the bread image though... Maybe the size and positioning. Try moving it about a bit see if it can look any better! Other than that, good work!

Jaysun

23-06-2009, 10:15 PM

I like it. It's clean and smooth.

Tooplee

23-06-2009, 10:17 PM

Very nice clean design overall. Not sure about the text used on the bread image though... Maybe the size and positioning. Try moving it about a bit see if it can look any better! Other than that, good work!

Thanks for the comment but yeah, I agree. It was hard to place text onto the image due to white text not showing as clear as the other image, for example. I wanted to retain the same composition and style as the other so i just tried to increase the shadow, I'll see what I can do though, cheers.

I like it. It's clean and smooth.

Thankyou :]

Johno

23-06-2009, 10:25 PM

I love it, can't really say much more than that haha! :)

Tooplee

24-06-2009, 04:13 PM

Thankyou :]

Blob

25-06-2009, 05:39 PM

i like it.

and the logo is cool lol

AlexOC

25-06-2009, 06:16 PM

It's great, the text on the bread image isn't too bad imo.

Tooplee

25-06-2009, 06:21 PM

Cheers guys :]

CANNIBALEX

29-06-2009, 06:04 PM

i love it and it's a good brand idea

Excellent2

29-06-2009, 10:16 PM

So I'm working on a new project which I hope will be pretty cool. I need to get some opinions on the login box which I have designed as that will come to reflect the overall site design.

What do you think? :)

http://www.grabup.com/uploads/3939ca0a67d810a35a7794b8d5aa8c07.png
Btw, the green bit is where the user selects the input box.

Trinity

30-06-2009, 12:54 AM

So I'm working on a new project which I hope will be pretty cool. I need to get some opinions on the login box which I have designed as that will come to reflect the overall site design.

What do you think? :)

http://www.grabup.com/uploads/3939ca0a67d810a35a7794b8d5aa8c07.png
Btw, the green bit is where the user selects the input box.

I think you pressed the wrong button.

Excellent2

30-06-2009, 10:38 AM

I think you pressed the wrong button.I think I did!

Mod, please delete my post, oops :P

iDenning

30-06-2009, 04:19 PM

So I'm working on a new project which I hope will be pretty cool. I need to get some opinions on the login box which I have designed as that will come to reflect the overall site design.

What do you think? :)

http://www.grabup.com/uploads/3939ca0a67d810a35a7794b8d5aa8c07.png
Btw, the green bit is where the user selects the input box.

I think you pressed the wrong button.

I think I did!

Mod, please delete my post, oops :P
i lol'd