Script

[Misawa]

Here... (http://www.scribd.com/doc/17305426/niadb)

[Blinger1]

HE'S BACK!!! welcome back ;)

[Misawa]

Only to post those 10 pages now I'm gone :)

[Monopoly]

you've said that the past ten threads you opened.
just admit that you don't care that much about the stupid forums being merged and shut up.

[Misawa]

I haven't opened any threads prior to this apart from the goodbye one. And I haven't left because they forums got merged, hah. See you on the other side, foolish one.

[beth]

generically boring,

[Misawa]

There's nothing generic about it. Please voice your opinion based on the script rather than me.

[Wootzeh]

been done before, please leave again.

[Misawa]

Considering you've zero idea of what it is I am writing, which I am not publically releasing, please leave yourself.

[beth]

There's nothing generic about it. Please voice your opinion based on the script rather than me.
i did.
please don't second guess my opinions just because they are negative.

i read your script, felt it was very generic and got bored.

and since i act and i direct, i would find that my opinion was valid.

[Misawa]

If you are a fellow director, you would have the knowledge to know more about the script than I am publically letting on.

[beth]

If you are a fellow director, you would have the knowledge to know more about the script than I am publically letting on.
well i stage direct, rather than film, so possibly not.

[Misawa]

I see.

[LuketheDuke]

Didnt you already post that on the lit section, i posted it had a good character and development but the situation seemed a little on the rails.

[beth]

I see.
oh and lying about -rep isn't cool.

[Misawa]

oh and lying about -rep isn't cool.

Lying? No, someone -rep me with your name. Anyway, keep on topic.

[Misawa]

I will elaborate on this:

It is the opening 10 pages of my latest script. I am not going to post any more of it. It has already been looked at by folks in the industry, both producers and actors/actresses. I have posted it here merely to gauge a little entry feedback from the average joe. It has a title, but I am not disclosing it publically.