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[Chris]
18-07-2005, 04:33 PM
ok i made this and i thought i would post it coz i think its quite good and plz rate out of 10 and if poss +rep


thanx
here it is:

WV6
18-07-2005, 04:56 PM
First of all. It's not an alteration if you made it my scratch. Nothing has been ' alterd '

Otherwise. Its good. :eusa_whis

Effete
18-07-2005, 05:07 PM
I think it would be better if you changed the angle that the laptop is open at. Right now it looks right angle/acute but most people have their laptops at an obtuse angle. Other than that, its a good piece of work :)

Kannae
18-07-2005, 05:28 PM
I like the keys but they dont seem isometric like the rest of it. Also no shading. Good apart from that 8/10

Pawf
18-07-2005, 06:02 PM
It's good, but you need to work on your shading skills. Also the shape looks a little off [I think this is because the laptop is a little thin]

But a good alt, well done :) Just work on your techniques 6/10

Noble
18-07-2005, 09:02 PM
I like it, and yes it is a sort of alteration because I am sure as he went on, he altered it. Well done; 8/10.

Triarch
19-07-2005, 02:40 AM
its ok, mouse looks weird though 8.8/10

Absently
19-07-2005, 03:19 AM
mmmmmm 8/10

samuel
19-07-2005, 03:29 AM
No Shading -3
Needs Angle of screen -1
Different Keys needed +0-
One of first Alts +2
Overall: +1
Outcome: 9/10
Btw, use my Laptop Tut (http://habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=57675). may help.
[click laptop tut above]

dudez12
23-07-2005, 03:14 AM
This is very cool. I like the idea. Very nicely done. Now all we need is for Sulake to make it :-p 10/10 great job!!!!

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