first layout design

[Calvin]

hey everyone, i've done a habbo layout design. its my first one.

http://www.iaza.com/work/090723C/layout6062293349-iaza.PNG

feel free to rate it and tell me what i should do to improve.
and should i remove the border around the content boxes? and the blue is just a random colour i put as the bg.

[iDenning]

remove the blue, use better font on banner and make text font in stats smaller, then your talking. Quite nice for your first.

[wsg14]

make the blue a white or a grey.

[Calvin]

I've made the text in stats smaller and changed text on banner. I've also changed the blue, which colour is best?;

http://www.iaza.com/work/090723C/layout8447780362-iaza.PNG

or

http://www.iaza.com/work/090723C/layout27538050931-iaza.PNG

[wsg14]

make the grey lighter.

[Calvin]

http://www.iaza.com/work/090723C/layout36443082698-iaza.PNG

how is that

[wsg14]

you need to now add more colour. it's basically all black and white/grey other than that banner.

[Black_Apalachi]

The updated version looks a million times better :D. I personally think a red or maroon background (anything not too bright really) would go well with the black/grey theme and would add some colour. I don't think the Hotel View banner suits the layout very much, maybe something with Red Dragons or Thrones might look cool?

Overall it's a pretty nice, simple layout and very good for your first product :).

[user130523]

update version = much better
also remove the background, if anyone was buying i'm sure they would rather use custom background rather than a grey dull background ;)

best of luck if you use it or sell it!

[Calvin]

yeah i'll most likely remove the background :P

how much you think it'll sell for?

[iDenning]

yeah i'll most likely remove the background :P

how much you think it'll sell for?
Shouldnt sell your first layout, should improve on it, then sell :P