Too bland?

[Patt]

http://i31.tinypic.com/2jahm69.jpg
http://i31.tinypic.com/2jahm69.jpg
Just checking through some of my designs, what do you guys think about this one? Personally i'm on the fence with it. So, could i please get some C&C.
It's just meant to be a maintenance page, nothing more nothing less.
:)
BTW, i apologize for the resolution, i was trying something out.

[TotalShambles]

Looks very plain and simple tbh..

[kk.]

the I in I'm needs to be capitalised.

[today]

I don't like the "contact" box either, remove the border and text and simply have icon's instead?

[RandomManJay]

It is a bit basic, but I do like it :P.

[Kyle!]

Yeah it's a bit too simple, just out of curiousity why were you looking at my profile? :P

[lick]

i thought it was still loading until i scrolled down the page

[Fehm]

D'ya know what.. I like it :)

[user130523]

nice and simple, and i love the msn, email, youtube etc thing at the bottem! :P

[Patt]

Thanks guys, i do understand why some people see it as too simplistic, but whatever floats you're boat. If i could make one last request, i'm learning to code and i'd really appreciate it if i could PM someone the code and get them to check over it and just generally see what i'm not doing right. :D
btw, i'd preffer not to post the code here as it's prob disgusting.

@Kyle!
I've been trying to learn how to do those nice headings you did in your coffee layout.