Mulan.

[Blissa]

This is my alt of Mulan. I still have to add a parasole, you can either consider this alt as Mulan or just a geisha.
It was based on Mulan though. Let me know what you think, CC is always welcome.

http://www.iaza.com/work/090727C/MulanWIP2715878420-iaza.gif

[Kyle]

Mulan is a warrior, not a geisha.

It's ok but the shading is off in some areas and it looks a bit crowded. The bottom of the face is also triangular :S

[Blissa]

It's based on when she goes to see the Matchmaker kyle. :P

[Kyle]

ok well the face looks too white, kinda like the joker from batman. the hair lacks shading, try adding some grey highlights.

tbh the head actually ruins the piece

[Blissa]

In the picture I used for reference, Mulans face was completely white.

I did shade the hair at first but then decided not to use it because it drew away from the dress, but this is just a WIP.

[RandomManJay]

It's not one of your best, but its good, 8/10.

[Blissa]

I actually think it is one of my best, but thanks for the comments. :)

[Kipp]

I actually like it. I think it looks good. 7/10

[Blissa]

Thanks Amerlca :)

[Mickword]

very good!

[Blissa]

I editted the face based on Kyles comments. Let me know what you think :)

http://www.iaza.com/work/090727C/MulanWIP28275199255-iaza.gif

[Kyle]

Okay so you've made the face look less white but now the edges are jagged, calling for some anti-aliasing on the insides of the chin. The hand also seems pretty deformed (the one holding the stick). The hands could do with being a bit pinker, too.

[Blissa]

Lol I just noticed the face thing Kyle. :) I fixed that again, I think the hands are fine.

http://www.iaza.com/work/090727C/WIPWIP8887223837-iaza.gif

[Cherpi]

I dislike the face, It just looks like a mess imo :( but the rest is very good 7.5/10

[Black_Apalachi]

Looks good Naomi :).

I was trying to search your old threads to look at your other alts, because according to comments they seem amazing but none of the display for me :(.

I think it might be something to do with Iaza deleting hosted images after a certain amount of time... so basically I think you should use a different uploader like Imageshack or something just so your work stays around for longer :D.

[Blissa]

Yeah Robald, I use iaza to host my images :P I might use Imageshack though.

[Amberr]

I actually quite like it
good job 7/10 xx

[ChrisObv]

ok well the face looks too white, kinda like the joker from batman. the hair lacks shading, try adding some grey highlights.

tbh the head actually ruins the piece

You never have anything positive to say, Or atleast i havnt seen you post anything positive, And you havn't actually ever posted anything that ive ever seen, so you seem slightly hipocritical.

[Kyle]

You never have anything positive to say, Or atleast i havnt seen you post anything positive, And you havn't actually ever posted anything that ive ever seen, so you seem slightly hipocritical.

Nobody is going to get better if i say how amazing their alts are. I point out all flaws for a reason :rolleyes: If they don't know what's wrong they'll think they are perfect and never even attempt to improve. Don't call me a hypocrite :eusa_wall Look up "constructive critisism" please :S

[Blissa]

Here's the alt with the Parasole:

http://www.iaza.com/work/090728C/Parasol7104798535-iaza.gif

[Kyle]

try lightening the colors since they blend too much with the headpiece :eusa_danc

[Blissa]

I decided not to go with the parasol, because it doesn't go right with the rest of the outfit, so I used chopsticks instead.
So this is the completed version everyone, let me know what you think.

http://www.iaza.com/work/090728C/11111114515951715-iaza.gif

[ExtraKen]

Cant see any image naomi :(

[:DBeth:D]

i think it looks good :)