[Alteration] [z] August Sp Entry [Archive]

AzX

21-08-2009, 12:14 AM

Didn't have much time this month as ive been busy, but it came out similar to what i wanted.

http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/8365/betagonebad.png

link: http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/8365/betagonebad.png

AzX

21-08-2009, 02:40 PM

Just some more info on it.

The theme of the game is, habbo goes over to beta, but the coding goes wrong and gets corrupted, so its up to the habbos to correct things by any means necessary.

Kyle

21-08-2009, 05:20 PM

I lold at "all your furni belongs to us"; you should change it to "all your furni are belong to us"

I'd like to see a little more contrast with the colors but it's lovely and good luck with the competition ;)

AzX

21-08-2009, 08:25 PM

thanks kyle :)

Weed

22-08-2009, 09:11 PM

Very niice work here.

Keep it up

Black_Apalachi

22-08-2009, 09:32 PM

Looks amazing :). I really wish this comp was on UK!

I just checked out the Group Page and it's the best Group Page I've ever seen Habbo make!

AzX

26-08-2009, 01:14 PM

thanks guys :)

Laurensh1

26-08-2009, 07:11 PM

Woa thats good! You deserve to win!

EpicBrand

27-08-2009, 02:03 AM

Good Job Ash ;)

Looks amazing :). I really wish this comp was on UK!

:o but you guys have Big Brother, no fair T-T I want Big Brother in the US.

Black_Apalachi

27-08-2009, 08:17 AM

Good Job Ash ;)

:o but you guys have Big Brother, no fair T-T I want Big Brother in the US.

If it was presented like it is here, no you don't :P. The page for it is rubbish as well.

LauFish

28-08-2009, 04:14 PM

Looks great!

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jacko2244

28-08-2009, 05:16 PM

Awesome! I like it :D

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Boonzeet

30-08-2009, 12:28 AM

The line-art is great. Seriously. Fluid and inventive, especially for the two people on the title screen.

My flaw is that your palette choice, and your shading are borderline awful. The heart in the game, assuming it represents life points, has two shades which are virtually the same, I had to strain my eyes to see the subtle difference -- one shade is a teeny darker and less saturated.

Otherwise it's great.

Boon

Kyle

30-08-2009, 12:55 PM

The line-art is great. Seriously. Fluid and inventive, especially for the two people on the title screen.

My flaw is that your palette choice, and your shading are borderline awful. The heart in the game, assuming it represents life points, has two shades which are virtually the same, I had to strain my eyes to see the subtle difference -- one shade is a teeny darker and less saturated.

Otherwise it's great.

Boon

The palette was limited for the competition