[Rk] - Just Married _ Sp September

[Rollerkingdom]

This is the small "blue print" as we can call it, but on the enlarged one i've made some new additions and fixed some stuff.

http://i31.tinypic.com/ebatrl.png

Enlargement Entry:
http://i29.tinypic.com/2wddo5d.png

• Made the grass into a heart shape
• Added hearts
• Added ring to their hand

p.s: I am not watermarking it, If you would like to rip, go ahead and take your risk, all you will be getting is a ban from the competition forever since i have Wips saved and Witnesses.

Rate it/Hate/Love it

[thorn]

That is nice!

A lot of detail in there! I like this entry and i think it is a winner!

[TonyBest]

Thats a good alt. I like the duck statue and the heart shaped grass, overall its a good alt and i hope it is either a runner up or the winner :)

[Kipp]

Thats a good entry, there are certain things I like about it. One thing is the duck, and the other is the hearts. Good luck with the competition.

[ExtraKen]

This is the small "blue print" as we can call it, but on the enlarged one i've made some new additions and fixed some stuff.

http://i31.tinypic.com/ebatrl.png

Enlargement Entry:
http://i29.tinypic.com/2wddo5d.png

• Made the grass into a heart shape
• Added hearts
• Added ring to their hand

p.s: I am not watermarking it, If you would like to rip, go ahead and take your risk, all you will be getting is a ban from the competition forever since i have Wips saved and Witnesses.

Rate it/Hate/Love it

Looks great althou I think the grass and the girls hair lack some detail if you could try and change that it would be good

[ItsDave]

Work on the smiles, because its been enlarged, you should be able to round of the smiles. But apart from that, fantastic re-size.

[Rollerkingdom]

Looks great althou I think the grass and the girls hair lack some detail if you could try and change that it would be good
Can you give me a tip on how i could fix the hair? Most people doesn't like it and idk how i could make it better.. + ima thinking on changing the grass into the marble since that is what the shading looks like.


Work on the smiles, because its been enlarged, you should be able to round of the smiles. But apart from that, fantastic re-size.

Thank you but if i round enough the smiles they won't be looking as a enlargement of the small habbo smile.

[Rollerkingdom]

I am sorry for double posting but i can't edit my first post or any other post >:/

More Update:

•Rice or Without Rice?
http://i25.tinypic.com/2ntcw95.png
-
http://i30.tinypic.com/300dwk5.png

• Added rice, do you think i should keep it?
• Added source light to the girls hair so it would look better
• Added emeralds to her tiara
• Switched girls ring to left hand but id like to keep it on the right hand of the guy so it shows up.
• Added and removed some shades on the guy's clothes.

[ExtraKen]

I am sorry for double posting but i can't edit my first post or any other post >:/

More Update:

•Rice or Without Rice?
http://i25.tinypic.com/2ntcw95.png
-
http://i30.tinypic.com/300dwk5.png

• Added rice, do you think i should keep it?
• Added source light to the girls hair so it would look better
• Added emeralds to her tiara
• Switched girls ring to left hand but id like to keep it on the right hand of the guy so it shows up.
• Added and removed some shades on the guy's clothes.

If you would only highlight the hair like the front bit like 2 or 3 lines and than on the back and maybe a few in the middle but a bit less than you got atm. it looks better with it but there is just too much atm its hard to find the perfect combination but im sure you can manage it :p and I would stick without the rice because its kinda unclear what it is if you dont know what it is :P

[Rollerkingdom]

well i made dark version as well. yes I shaded it and put lightning so it won't be a boring dark hair

http://i30.tinypic.com/24noe9i.png

Do you prefer it?
and extra i think the rice would be nice cauz most people knows that rice is something used on a wedding to throw at the couple.

[ExtraKen]

well i made dark version as well. yes I shaded it and put lightning so it won't be a boring dark hair

http://i30.tinypic.com/24noe9i.png

Do you prefer it?
and extra i think the rice would be nice cauz most people knows that rice is something used on a wedding to throw at the couple.

Oehhh ye black hair looks allot better :o

Oh and a question :p is it allowed to enlarge an alt? Because the thing says like a basic habbo thing? :P Just wondering cuz I might enter lolz

[Rollerkingdom]

Oehhh ye black hair looks allot better :o

Oh and a question :p is it allowed to enlarge an alt? Because the thing says like a basic habbo thing? :P Just wondering cuz I might enter lolz

Yes you are, i asked nME (the guy that host it) and he said u can enlarge anything that is related to habbo.

[ExtraKen]

Yes you are, i asked nME (the guy that host it) and he said u can enlarge anything that is related to habbo.


Ah wicked :D anyways good luck your entry looks rlly great

[Duave]

Congrats

Lol

[Rollerkingdom]

Ah wicked :D anyways good luck your entry looks rlly great

Thank you ;)

[Mickword]

Brilliant! Well done, +REP.


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[Rollerkingdom]

more updates:
http://i28.tinypic.com/24yokux.png

[Accipiter]

i'd say fix the edges of the grass (or marble depending on change) play around with the person right hand (his right hand not our right) and the faces need serious work! you can make a mouth look different when its zoomed in, sure on a wedding day she'd wear make up & lipstick? ;D

if you done that it'd be perfect :)

[Rollerkingdom]

i'd say fix the edges of the grass (or marble depending on change) play around with the person right hand (his right hand not our right) and the faces need serious work! you can make a mouth look different when its zoomed in, sure on a wedding day she'd wear make up & lipstick? ;D

if you done that it'd be perfect :)

I've AA most of the grass edges..
and i which person's right hand? The guy? I think his hand is my favorite lol but okay thanks.. I was thinking of adding lipstick so i might and i am not that good with make up but i've added a bit on her cheek if u look closely..
Idk what u mean by serious work on their face.. i've shaded the most i can, well not the most but if i shade more it's going to look gross, anyways ill add lipstick and work around the mouth.

[Accipiter]

the 1-2 pixel shading around the face will be disapointing most probaly when they ask to add detail.

i dislike the cloud in the background to.

and your mouths look very simialr to those nme has on his enlargement.

[Rollerkingdom]

Make up :)?
http://i32.tinypic.com/10g9rvn.png

[Black_Apalachi]

So you did that enlargement someone posted in another thread then? :D

This is amazing but each update is slowly taking it more and more over-board.

I wasn't sure about the rice until you added the rabbit and I thought this and the cloud were a nice touch. I much prefer the girl with lighter hair but the make-up is awful - she looks like she has buck teeth. Either do lipstick on a closed mouth or get rid of it; it was fine without.

The floor I wouldn't worry about from a material/texture aspect; I'd leave it as it is but just make it a nice rosy shade of pink rather than the dull green.

I also preferred the highlights on the guy's jacket which I think you've removed.

I would stop adding bits to it from now on as this is a prime example of less is more. Very good work I have to say, +rep :).

Out of interest, is the duck pillar originally from a Water Garden?

Edit: I think I prefer the darker hair on second thoughts. It's just the thought of both dark hair clashing that put me off, but it's OK really.

[Accipiter]

to make her mouth look better, if you have paint.net grab a red from her lips and put it quite largly transparent and go down her mouth, and then maybe add a touch of grey transparent and it might look like her teeth are back in her mouth. the make up on the eyes i think is an improovement tbh as the face was to plain before and all in all i think her mouth is an improovement.

the rabbit looks like its eating the rice ;D

[Rollerkingdom]

So you did that enlargement someone posted in another thread then? :D

This is amazing but each update is slowly taking it more and more over-board.

I wasn't sure about the rice until you added the rabbit and I thought this and the cloud were a nice touch. I much prefer the girl with lighter hair but the make-up is awful - she looks like she has buck teeth. Either do lipstick on a closed mouth or get rid of it; it was fine without.

The floor I wouldn't worry about from a material/texture aspect; I'd leave it as it is but just make it a nice rosy shade of pink rather than the dull green.

I also preferred the highlights on the guy's jacket which I think you've removed.

I would stop adding bits to it from now on as this is a prime example of less is more. Very good work I have to say, +rep :).

Out of interest, is the duck pillar originally from a Water Garden?

Edit: I think I prefer the darker hair on second thoughts. It's just the thought of both dark hair clashing that put me off, but it's OK really.

First of all Thanks for this great Comment, so as you said you preferred the black hair better so mkay, let's keep that. Btw what enlargement are you talking about? This enlargement is my own alt that i did from the first page =) if you check back.

I will be working on the girls' mouth a bit more around so i can get a nice lipstick without her teeth showing up or not that much.

Glad you liked the rabbit with the rice idea :P but for some reason on my computer the green floor with the shading looks rlly good, but ill give it a check on my sis pc which has a lighter screen.

The highlights were removed because some people were saying that i had ripped the SP example shading so i just took it off so they can stop saying stuff when i really didn't rip anything. The duck statue enlargement is from the water garden ;)

and I don't plan on adding anything else, Ill just be now working on the stuff that need some fixs, mainly her mouth.


to make her mouth look better, if you have paint.net grab a red from her lips and put it quite largly transparent and go down her mouth, and then maybe add a touch of grey transparent and it might look like her teeth are back in her mouth. the make up on the eyes i think is an improovement tbh as the face was to plain before and all in all i think her mouth is an improovement.

the rabbit looks like its eating the rice ;D

I don't have paint.net, All was done on paint.. so ill figure out a way there to fix it and make it look better but i agree that the make up made it look way better. and yes the rabbit is suppose to be eating the rice hehehe :P

Thanks.. will update soon as possible, now i gotta head to my first day of school.


Edit: Is it Better?
http://i30.tinypic.com/2vj3gaw.png

A mod please join this post,
http://i31.tinypic.com/vxcbyd.png

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[Black_Apalachi]

Oh just someone posted that guy in that size (but in a normal pose) and said someone else had made it, they were just showing it off because they thought it was cool. So I realised who actually made it once I saw this thread :).

The mouth still looks a little odd to me... as if she's either covering big teeth or pouting. It's fine really though; the overall alteration is still awesome, regardless.

And yeah, the grass isn't a big deal either. I just thought pink would suit and look nice with the pillar.

Glad the feedback was useful!

[Rollerkingdom]

Oh just someone posted that guy in that size (but in a normal pose) and said someone else had made it, they were just showing it off because they thought it was cool. So I realised who actually made it once I saw this thread :).

The mouth still looks a little odd to me... as if she's either covering big teeth or pouting. It's fine really though; the overall alteration is still awesome, regardless.

And yeah, the grass isn't a big deal either. I just thought pink would suit and look nice with the pillar.

Glad the feedback was useful!

Thank you, i still have a feeling that i can fix her mouth to make it better not like it's covering her teeth, ill work around it and will upload whenever possible.

[Describe]

I think it's great and I wouldn't add much more to it as too much in such a space might leave a 'crammed' effect which would dampen how good the piece actually is.

[Rollerkingdom]

I think the litpstick looks much better now. Do u agree?
http://i29.tinypic.com/op4ql4.gif

also fixed the eye lashes

[Rollerkingdom]

Also i made a better version of the smile
http://i27.tinypic.com/34phm6p.gif

*Mod please join those posts< Thank you, Ill appreciate

[ExtraKen]

the one with the smile isnt good I would send in the one without the smile cause it looks better and more " natural "

[Rollerkingdom]

Thank you extra, i might still be adding a background with a lake and a church on the back maybe, give some perspective.

[Dinosaurawrr]

wow
i just stared at it for ages
its amazing
i really like it looks like you have put alot of effort in
hope you win aw :] x
i honestly dont think anything needs improving tbh :o

[Black_Apalachi]

Thank you extra, i might still be adding a background with a lake and a church on the back maybe, give some perspective.


I think it's great and I wouldn't add much more to it as too much in such a space might leave a 'crammed' effect which would dampen how good the piece actually is.

Exactly. I was going to say maybe add some sort of sky with the cloud (just a bit of blue) but I really wouldn't add anything.

The mouth still looks odd. I think the buck teeth effect is coming from the fact that the top lip looks like it comes out further than the bottom. Perhaps making the smile bigger (showing more teeth) might help?

[e5]

Love it. It's really good:)

[Rollerkingdom]

Added background.. is it better?
http://i29.tinypic.com/2rwqdk8.gif

[Black_Apalachi]

Oh wow the background is amazing!! I'm not too keen on the chapel but it really does bring it to life. Definitely changing what I said about no background now!

Out of interest what are the competition specs?

[Rollerkingdom]

Oh wow the background is amazing!! I'm not too keen on the chapel but it really does bring it to life. Definitely changing what I said about no background now!

Out of interest what are the competition specs?

The competition is to simply make a habbo enlargement..
You may enlarge a furniture, or a habbo or an alt, or w.e that has to do inside the "Habbo theme"

Not allowed animations
and add quality to the work.

Sorry for the double :P whenever i mod pass by join them please.
http://i28.tinypic.com/33w8e9t.gif

Fixed the church more

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[thorn]

Is it me or its gone a bit Blurry.

It might just be my eyes as it is 1:30 :D

[Rollerkingdom]

I am working on the colors.

[Black_Apalachi]

In that case, are you sure they won't mind a big proportion of if not being an enlargement? Maybe just the two figures with pillar etc was best for the sepcs?

[Rollerkingdom]

I hope not, ill be asking the host and see what he says btw i did a whole change with colors...

does it look better?
http://i31.tinypic.com/fc0cpt.gif

[Black_Apalachi]

No looks worse now. The chapel is an improvement though, but it needs to be in the picture completely. I think you need to lower the hill it's on so the whole building can be seen and then the cross needs to go on the steeple.

[Accipiter]

the chapel front is out of perspective, if the windows at the back face us then the front would also face < or \/ like a square you should just do a whole chapel behind them and turn that grass into marble.

[ExtraKen]

I hope not, ill be asking the host and see what he says btw i did a whole change with colors...

does it look better?
http://i31.tinypic.com/fc0cpt.gif

You kinda ruined your entry there. the chapel makes no sense thou like liam said the perspective is all wrong. I think OR you make a good background with the rite perspective OR you just leave it out because I do think it will be to much.

[Amberr]

Thats awesome well done :D xx

[Rollerkingdom]

No looks worse now. The chapel is an improvement though, but it needs to be in the picture completely. I think you need to lower the hill it's on so the whole building can be seen and then the cross needs to go on the steeple.

By it looks worse now you mean the grass color or the chapel?
what about the hair.. it's the color better?

[Rollerkingdom]

Mod please join them :) Thank you so much♥

http://i28.tinypic.com/25u4exh.gif
Chapel better?

[Jamesy]

It looks a lot better now the church doesn't stand out so glaringly.
And you know it's within the rules to post again if you are adding information :)

The level of detail too is quite stunning, although where their shadow is seems to be without grass texture.

[Rollerkingdom]

It looks a lot better now the church doesn't stand out so glaringly.
And you know it's within the rules to post again if you are adding information :)

The level of detail too is quite stunning, although where their shadow is seems to be without grass texture.

Thank you.. ill see what i can with the the pathway texture.. maybe change to marble or something like it..
and you mean by posting like i did up there when i changed the church, it's okay to double post in that case.?

[Jamesy]

As long as it's adding information and past the editing time it's fine :).

The grass is fine, but look where the shadow is under the people. It's just a plain colour rather than a darker version of the grass. Although this might be going OTT.

[Rollerkingdom]

so is the shadow better now?
http://i30.tinypic.com/2evw1us.gif

[Jamesy]

oops I think we are getting our wires crossed here. I mean for the shadow, put a darker version of the pattern you have put for the path - not a darker colour. My mistake in not explaining myself better.

[iDenning]

so is the shadow better now?
http://i30.tinypic.com/2evw1us.gif
We have a winner.

If you don't win then I will run infront of a truck.

[Rollerkingdom]

oops I think we are getting our wires crossed here. I mean for the shadow, put a darker version of the pattern you have put for the path - not a darker colour. My mistake in not explaining myself better.


ooo lol i see what you mean..
ill do that xD thanks.

btw thanks denning ;)

[Boonzeet]

We have a winner.

If you don't win then I will run infront of a truck.

i'm tempted to enter now ;)

[thorn]

i'm tempted to enter now ;)

Lol! So you can see him get hit by a Truck?? Lol.

[ToxicMint]

They both look really good, I like the normal sized one more though.

[ExtraKen]

Lol! So you can see him get hit by a Truck?? Lol.

Will happen im entering to haha :D lol

Anyway Mr RK did you change the hair on the girl? Cuz it looks just flat black now :o

[Black_Apalachi]

Ahh I've been away from this thread for too long!! :P

The chapel is a million times better, but now it's more on the edge of the cliff; it needs to be more of a slope rather than vertical steps lol. It doesn't need to be so high up either, it's too squashed into the corner of the image. I'd lower the platform about half way, then slope it down from the door.

Now that the hair has darkened you can't see the detail as well which is a shame. I think the hair was fine before.

I prefer the grass as it is now (the lighter version, as it was originally).

The shadow under the characters was fine before, it's too dark now.

So altogether I'd; put the hair back, put the shadow back and make the chapel more accessible to the disabled and then the whole alteration will be perfect :).

[AlexOC]

That is very good, i hope you win.

[Volumise]

love it ;)

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[Rollerkingdom]

Ahh I've been away from this thread for too long!! :P

The chapel is a million times better, but now it's more on the edge of the cliff; it needs to be more of a slope rather than vertical steps lol. It doesn't need to be so high up either, it's too squashed into the corner of the image. I'd lower the platform about half way, then slope it down from the door.

Now that the hair has darkened you can't see the detail as well which is a shame. I think the hair was fine before.

I prefer the grass as it is now (the lighter version, as it was originally).

The shadow under the characters was fine before, it's too dark now.

So altogether I'd; put the hair back, put the shadow back and make the chapel more accessible to the disabled and then the whole alteration will be perfect :).

Can you show me which hair you liked the most from the previous update cauz on my pc the brightness of the hairs look the same is so hard to know which one you are saying.. :P Ill bring back their shadow to normal too but about the chapel idk it's really a pain in that place you know working with perspective and it's been my first time doing it.. i think it's good and i would like to keep it for now maybe next time whenever i use perspective ill try to do it better >_<

+ i would like to thanks everyone

[Rollerkingdom]

Updated:

•Brought the shade under habbos back but added the pattern on it but darker since it's under the shade
•Fixed hair
•Fixed the staircase area of the church

http://i30.tinypic.com/1266z2h.gif

[Rollerkingdom]

sorry for the triple post but id like to say that i am checking it now on my sis imac where the brightness is better and the shade under the habbos are still darker..
so i am fixing it.. + ill try to get that lightning source of the hair lower..

[Suspective]

This certainly for winner. Well done :)

[Black_Apalachi]

http://i29.tinypic.com/2rwqdk8.gif

That's the hair I meant, although the highlights you've added to the darker hair look good too :P.

The shadow under them would probably be best a tiny bit darker than it is here as well.

The church steps also look better in this one but it's fine really - it's not the main subject of the image.

Good luck! :)

[Rollerkingdom]

http://i29.tinypic.com/2rwqdk8.gif

That's the hair I meant, although the highlights you've added to the darker hair look good too :P.

The shadow under them would probably be best a tiny bit darker than it is here as well.

The church steps also look better in this one but it's fine really - it's not the main subject of the image.

Good luck! :)

Yah i am sticking with the hair i did above but make the highlights a bit darker.. they are showing too much..

The shade under the habbos ill change.. and the stair steps ill have to keep the one i did above because the one you posted above this post had a different angle for the church...

[Rollerkingdom]

Better?
http://i26.tinypic.com/zsu5o5.gif

[Black_Apalachi]

Yeah, I wouldn't mess with it much more now ;).

[Rollerkingdom]

alright thanks everyone for their help :)
+rep for the ones that helped.

[9y]

Amazing thing :)