How can I improve my layout? +rep

[Feep]

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/1329/layoutcopycopy.jpg

[jacko2244]

A diffrent background, Use a basic text like Verdana

[iDenning]

I agree with above post, try make it more pixelated too.

http://files.uploadffs.com/6/f6356dd6/habbobgtemplate.png

Theres a template for you for the future, just add your stuff inside and do your stuff :) Theres a random line at the bottom so just delete it.

Try not to make the layout toooo busy or it puts people off.

[VirtualG]

sorry but I dont really like it, you should start again...

[Feep]

Ok, I've taken in your advice and edited:

http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/1329/layoutcopycopy.jpg

[Black_Apalachi]

I was going to say there's too many colours involved so pick a colour scheme and stick to it, but the updated version looks much better :).

All I would do now is change the background for something much simpler. It's too busy for the rest of the layout, you only want a pattern or even a solid colour (maybe a light grey or red to compliment the colour scheme, and you could still keep the Telephone Box).

The text still needs sorting though. Align the main content text to the left and make the navigation links text smaller. There's also a typo where it says 'Guids' instead of 'Guides'.