First alt

[Dan...]

http://i33.tinypic.com/143ghnp.png
Theme: Money
It's my first alt, so please give me some tips aswell.

[Alkaz]

Its ok, the perspective on the cases isnt all that good, the money is too flat, there should be some shadows on the floor and the guards trousers, the stripes look wierd.

All in all, a good first alt :)

[e5]

Nice but,

The money boxes aren't in line, nor are they in the squares like on a habbo room.

Make them to fit and it will look alot better :)

[Kyle]

why are the bodyguards wearing tracksuit bottoms?

[Accipiter]

i think its fairly good for a first alt.

@e5 i think he's tried to make it more realistic, not many people like ocd tendancies shown in a online game.

theirs quite a bit of detail in those notes which i think is good for a first alt.

[Dan...]

Thanks for the comments ill use what you suggested to me in my next alt.
There wearing tracksuits because I want them to.

[maccarox481]

may i ask what parts you have made from scratch and do you have W.I.Ps (you will be asked for them in future)

its an ok alt but i do want to know what parts you have made because a fair bit is c+p. (The guards, The Lady, The room)

Maccarox481

[Famish]

Canny for a first, the first problem that caught my eye though was the fact the cases aren't in-line, as e5 also spotted.

A couple of things that couple be improved but a nice first alt :D

[-iScaz,]

cool first alt :) i agree with the cases thing but you have to learn :D well done x

[OllzIsTasty]

Good for your alteration. Sort out the problems that have been arised as I totally agree about the cases. Overall though I like it! :)

[jacko2244]

thats pretty cool for your first!

But you should line up the cases!

[RandomManJay]

I like the money in mid air, one of them on the right side is missing a corner, the cases look off but the money inside them is good, try making it into more of a scene :P, like add a load of people dancing around or make it into a fancy room etc. :P.