View Full Version : [Alteration] Jedi Alt #1 (animated)
gomiller43
04-10-2009, 06:54 PM
Comments please. I know it needs a little work, specifically on his clothes and the saber hilt.
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/94/m_12a07c529bc643eeb0389bfca26c7bba.gif
The hand seems to change color half way through... It doesn't really look that much like a light sabre so maybe you should work on the form a little - it's a light
source in itself too so you could even shade the guys clothes as if the sabre is shining onto them.
The animation itself is quite choppy and slightly slow. I wouldn't want a light sabre like that if I was about to fight Jabba the Hutt or whoever the hell the bad guy is, he'd have me dead before my light sabre had even half extended. Speed it up a little ;)
dbgtz
05-10-2009, 03:46 PM
bad shading and slow. Learn to actually make a decent image before animating it please. Take all of the things above into account.
RandomManJay
05-10-2009, 11:12 PM
There are quite a few white bits that shouldn't be there and the animation is too slow, also, a lightsaber doesn't grow like that, the tip comes out first and extends as the rest of the saber comes out.
thorn
06-10-2009, 08:59 PM
Like everyone else, It is very slow,
And Kyle i don't see the Hand changing colour??
Make it the same speed as your Harry Potter Alt :D
Like everyone else, It is very slow,
And Kyle i don't see the Hand changing colour??
Make it the same speed as your Harry Potter Alt :D
Yeah, I meant the handle but for some reason missed the "le"
thorn
06-10-2009, 10:34 PM
Yeah, I meant the handle but for some reason missed the "le"
Oh Got ya, I'm noty sure it changes colour, it looks like the Dark shade and light shade get switched around.
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