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Rollerkingdom
15-10-2009, 08:43 PM
Background Story: This flirtatious vampire was born 200 years ago but still in shape, she loves to offer orange to the men, this orange contains some type of potion that makes them follow her until they end up with the fangs biting the neck. Her favorite color is red, (no wonder why.) and she hates white habbos because their blood is too salty

http://i37.tinypic.com/59t11.gif

Comments/Critics

Xoim
15-10-2009, 08:46 PM
It looks abit weird.
The fangs look like this :B
:L

Better than what I can do though,
She reminds off wonder woman for some reason though.

dbgtz
15-10-2009, 08:50 PM
Quite horrid. Vampires are pale, zombies are green. The cloak bits dont seem quite right and the shoes are like square :S The boob line is a bit too straight aswell.

thorn
15-10-2009, 09:00 PM
Not a Fan.

The legs look HUGE, making her costume look tiny.

Like dbgtz says Vampires aren't green.


http://www.stockcutouts.com/products_pictures/vampire1%20faceless%20normal.jpg

Her Hair looks a bit dodgy as well.
And the Boots are a bit... Strange.

But nice idea, and if you're entering into StrayPixels then good luck! :)
Just Remembered You Can't As You Won Last Months.

Rollerkingdom
15-10-2009, 11:21 PM
Not a Fan.

The legs look HUGE, making her costume look tiny.

Like dbgtz says Vampires aren't green.



Her Hair looks a bit dodgy as well.
And the Boots are a bit... Strange.

But nice idea, and if you're entering into StrayPixels then good luck! :)
Just Remembered You Can't As You Won Last Months.

***** i kno the rules pretty well
anyways vampires can be any color..
it's my style..

ExtraKen
16-10-2009, 10:32 AM
***** i kno the rules pretty well
anyways vampires can be any color..
it's my style..

Lolz at the stars 8) uhm well actually vampires cant be any colour if you wikipedia them you will see that they are pale white always I never rlly saw a green vampire althou there is a black one in twilight but that is still not green so ye.

I do like the costume and the story of the orange xD but ye theres some errors that need to be fixed like the shoes but im sure you can do it

Accipiter
16-10-2009, 11:14 AM
tis a lady gaga vampire.

but yeah the green is wierd o_o

and if its for sp you need a background do you not? :P

Kyle
16-10-2009, 12:49 PM
shoes look flat; hair isn't great; hate the teeth.

not really on of your best

Powez
16-10-2009, 04:45 PM
The hair Reminds Me Of A Spider Somehow? + I Agree With Above Posts :)

Rollerkingdom
16-10-2009, 07:47 PM
It's not for sp since i can't win this month
and well this is what makes the vampire unique :) The green skin
anyways thanks for those who liked and w.e for those that disliked >_>

Accipiter
16-10-2009, 08:04 PM
It's not for sp since i can't win this month
and well this is what makes the vampire unique :) The green skin
anyways thanks for those who liked and w.e for those that disliked >_>

-slaps you for turning away negative critism with a blind eye :(

is that editted off one of your lady gaga alts (if you made one **** knows, i know someone made one) but it looks like lady gaga o_o

and the green is bad, she looks like the female vampire from being human (who dies and the clothes are laid out funny as ****)

her hair looks like the hair from the female in the enemies team in dodgeball movie.

she has a fat ass should have kept legs the same and her pants look half way down her legs o_o

the top half is definately better than the bottom half. Orange is so random though.

Rollerkingdom
17-10-2009, 04:37 AM
-slaps you for turning away negative critism with a blind eye :(

is that editted off one of your lady gaga alts (if you made one **** knows, i know someone made one) but it looks like lady gaga o_o

and the green is bad, she looks like the female vampire from being human (who dies and the clothes are laid out funny as ****)

her hair looks like the hair from the female in the enemies team in dodgeball movie.

she has a fat ass should have kept legs the same and her pants look half way down her legs o_o

the top half is definately better than the bottom half. Orange is so random though.

nah, never attempted a lady gaga alt
and mostly people are saying it looks like Gaga gone Vampire >_<
and you kno you like the orange. + habbo ass is annoying to make :)

Chancer!!
17-10-2009, 10:11 PM
Well ignoring ever one elses comments... I like it :D I always like ur alts though lol!

Rollerkingdom
20-10-2009, 03:07 AM
Well ignoring ever one elses comments... I like it :D I always like ur alts though lol!

hehe Thank you <3 Glad to hear that!

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