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ttranquility.
23-07-2005, 09:46 PM
I wrote this like when i was 9 :)


Happy places!!!!!

My happy place has beautiful water falls and a montion af rainbows

There would be a Boy who got ship Wrecked.

I would help him and i would live in a tree house

with rabbits and i would swim with dolphins and when i would sing

birds would come and land on my shoulder

then butterflys would come and flutter aroud me

and the rabits would play with me and the tigers would be my friend

and the dinosours would take me places

there would be horses too everything would be happy

until the evil witch came along and ruined everything she burnt down the village and didnt know about

me and my tree house and she was curious too know where the beautiful voice was comeing from .

She went out for a search useing savagies from the village

where was she gonna get food from?

where was she gonna live is the witch found her?

What hould she do?

She was thinking hard and long but then

BOOOM she herd sumone crying out on shore

and it seemed to be the most handsomest boyy she had ever seen!

so she went and helped him she took him to her tree house

he said she was beautiful when he awoke and they kissed(such a magical moment )

she said she loved him but after a week they got seperated he got captured by the witch !

she was so shocked! (BUM BUM BUMMMMM)

and soo on ..... BUM BUM BUMMMMMMM

THE END .

Surname
23-07-2005, 09:47 PM
This should be in the articles and stories section. I shall read it when it is.

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