[Rk] - Girl of World of Warcraft

[Rollerkingdom]

Okay so i decided to spend some time on a really good alt and i loved this pic
so i decided to make an alt "BASED" on it..
http://www.freakygaming.com/gallery/game_wallpapers/world_of_warcraft/human_mage.jpg

here's it done:
http://i35.tinypic.com/adnryt.gif

Cmment/Critic/Rate Ty

[RandomManJay]

I like the shading, but she looks a bit out of proportion, like her body looks too long and her legs (inside the skirt ;)) are too short, try giving her shoes, it might even her out.

[dbgtz]

Agree with above and the fire looks quite dim and lifeless.

[ExtraKen]

I like the face :D her boobs seem to be high though.
The rest of the body looks nice but I think because of her boobs being so high it makes her really tall.

[rifleboyaka]

i agree with all the above posts 7/10

Wrong section as WOW has nout to do with Habbo :)

[Kyle]

i agree with all the above posts 7/10

Wrong section as WOW has nout to do with Habbo :)

It's a habbo alt ejit

[Rollerkingdom]

I like the shading, but she looks a bit out of proportion, like her body looks too long and her legs (inside the skirt ;)) are too short, try giving her shoes, it might even her out.

Thank you. Ill try to add something on the bottom to even her out


Agree with above and the fire looks quite dim and lifeless.

I am not really good with fire and i think it looks fine..
thanks anyway..


I like the face :D her boobs seem to be high though.
The rest of the body looks nice but I think because of her boobs being so high it makes her really tall.

Thanks.. Ill try to add shoes like someone mentioned so prob it is going to even her out.

[Chancer!!]

Its realy good :eusa_clap :) The boobs need to be moved down but I think the rest is good! :D

You should make a background for it now so it is WOW IN HABBO :D

9/10 Just need a few tweaks!

[dbgtz]

If you go on x factor and sing and the judges say no and you need to improve on something, you don't say no I think it's fine and they then magically put you through. You improve and try the next year or something.

So improve the fire and don't be a douchebag.

[Rollerkingdom]

If you go on x factor and sing and the judges say no and you need to improve on something, you don't say no I think it's fine and they then magically put you through. You improve and try the next year or something.

So improve the fire and don't be a douchebag.

WTH.. like i said i am not good making fires..
if i am not good on something you don't shouldn't expect me to turn a pro in few hours..
and your being the douchebag here.

[dbgtz]

No you put, "I think it's fine", not even trying to improve it. Not many can do fires/explosions but you dont just say you think it's fine and not try to improve it ;l.

[Kyle]

you seem to have suddenly begun to turn down constructive criticism lately.

I suggest that you take dbgtz' advice and at least attempt to improve your skills by practising drawing fire. As you know, practice makes perfect.

You've been working on your anatomy for a long time yet still find a few errors in some of your work so you keep trying; why not do this with fire?

I'd like to have seen the blue stick-thing (staff?) acting as an extra light source, projecting a blue light onto one side, whilst the fire provides another source. Think about your shading.

[Rollerkingdom]

you seem to have suddenly begun to turn down constructive criticism lately.

I suggest that you take dbgtz' advice and at least attempt to improve your skills by practising drawing fire. As you know, practice makes perfect.

You've been working on your anatomy for a long time yet still find a few errors in some of your work so you keep trying; why not do this with fire?

I'd like to have seen the blue stick-thing (staff?) acting as an extra light source, projecting a blue light onto one side, whilst the fire provides another source. Think about your shading.

The thing is that the main reason on this was the character but if you want sure ill try it whenever i have nothing to do..
or come back to it later on..
about the effects idk how i could do it >:S never rlly tried creating effect..
guess it's needed a lot of colors with close shades..
and about shading did you mean to think about it for the fire+stick or the character?

[Kyle]

The thing is that the main reason on this was the character but if you want sure ill try it whenever i have nothing to do..
or come back to it later on..
about the effects idk how i could do it >:S never rlly tried creating effect..
guess it's needed a lot of colors with close shades..
and about shading did you mean to think about it for the fire+stick or the character?

What I meant is consider all light sources