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Xoim
11-11-2009, 07:54 PM
I enjoyed doing it and I think it looks alright,

Rate/slate
/10 please :]

http://i33.tinypic.com/23h0gvl.png

Lew
11-11-2009, 08:41 PM
Ill give you a 7.5

1. Where do the doormats go?
2. The hills with yukkas on are abit too high

sLaggings
11-11-2009, 08:41 PM
You're a friend. But you don't get special ratings for that.

Well... I've never seen twilight. So I'm basing this on design/originality/and the other stuff :P

The cave is original, but lacks a certain.. 'cave' feeling to it. The top of it should be better stacked (YOU CAN USE DITCHES FOR AWSOME STACKS NOW), like more than just yukkas. The door into the house is kinda hard to see, most noobs wouldn't find that, however it is a cool idea. The bars stacked for stairs are pretty nice. Inside of the house is quite empty tbh. Piller doesn't belong. Pines look weird as the other corner. Stairs are really quite... useless? I like the way you use the posters and stuff to make it look underground-ish.

If I had to rate it as a room, I'd say 6 1/2 / 10.

Xoim
11-11-2009, 08:42 PM
I was thinking of making another room but I wasn't sure, until it got good enough reviews :]

sLaggings
11-11-2009, 08:44 PM
Btw, I love the ghosts. I'll change mine to 7/10, because originally I didn't see the ghosts. Fits the room perfect.

Xoim
11-11-2009, 08:45 PM
x] thanks Mattt <3 :]

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