a song I just wrote xD

[clueless]

http://www.uploadstuff.co.uk/u/1260533231.wma (http://www.uploadstuff.co.uk/u/1260533231.wma)


okay im avoiding sewing LOL so i picked up my guitar and just made up a little song

you might need to turn ur volume right up because its mighty quiet but ill write the lyrics so u can understand what im saying lol

its far from a masterpiece pmsl the lyrics are **** but i didnt really try that hard i just idk made it randomly :eusa_pray but i quite like the little tune aha

so yeah please comment :arrow: try comment on the song not like the quality of recording and my singings pretty lame in it i was concentratin on lyrics and tune more so yeh :exclaim:


I went to that party that you were at last night but you didnt seem to care that I was there
You just completely ignroed me as you talked amongst your friends, felt thi night would never end, I felt so lonely.
I didnt expect you to cling to me all night I'm just saying it would have been nice if you had given me some time
Instead you huddled in the corner with thoe friends and it comes to no suprise that you were talking about me.

We seemed to become so close so fast I shouldnt have expected it to last but I ignored your old ex friends
I thought you were kind and had a really loving soul could I be more far wrong shows how little I did know
As soon as I walked out you didnt bother anymore found many others to replace me until I walked back through the door
With a big fake grin you said you had missed me so much after a hug a smile a laugh and a while this didnt appear so

I went to that party that you were at last night but you didnt even noticed that i was there
You jsut completely ignored me as you talked amongst your friend but that night soon did end and I no longer care.

[Hecktix]

it's not that bad tbh, lyrics are quite interesting too tbh.

For something written quickly it's quite impressive :)

[clueless]

thanks haha i think lyrics are really important and theres so much potential so im ashamed of these LOL i might rewrite properly when i have more time :)
and like add a bit more to it rather than just a loop of 5 chords
its just the basis if u get me :)

[Hecktix]

a song has to be developed so yeah I get you :)

You sound quite good on the guitar though, a lot of people I hear online are quite... well.. poor tbh.

[clueless]

:)

and thanku! ive been learning for a bit over a year now my dad teaches me woop woop i love it

[-K8T!E-]

Love the guitar :) You have a really nice voice & I like the song :)

[Pix]

That sounds pretty awesome actually. You might wanna add a chorus or a bridge which will also add some more chords and change the tempo abit, also do some fingerpicking at the beggining it will make it sound much better :)

[clueless]

Love the guitar :) You have a really nice voice & I like the song :)
thanku :]


That sounds pretty awesome actually. You might wanna add a chorus or a bridge which will also add some more chords and change the tempo abit, also do some fingerpicking at the beggining it will make it sound much better :)

yup definatly theres where im trying to lead it now :)
thanks very much!

[Meree.]

Pretty good. Just couldn't really hear you in the clip :( Was you far away from the mic?

[clueless]

thanks and nopee its just i was using a headset mic and to get decent quality i had to turn it down quite a bit :x i need to get a new mic seriously aha
but thanks anyway!

[Meree.]

No problem! And oh, well from what I could hear, it was really good :) Interesting lyrics aswell.

[clueless]

thankyou :)

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[Sunnily]

Not bad at all song words wise. I'm gonna write a song now! Lmao

[Black_Apalachi]

I think everything about it is pretty good, the lyrics, tune and voice. I'd love to hear a better quality recording of it some time :).