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Misawa
19-12-2009, 01:45 AM
The title says all. Some poetry I wrote years ago.


Midsummer

Summer meadows,
Sun bleached sweet
Berry fields,
Sun kissed secret

Dancing vegetables,
Prancing fruits
Tasteful red,
Refreshing white

Rainless rainbows
Of peach and plum
Suburban Sundays
Of shine and sun

Remarkable,
Delectable
Summer heat,
Summer sizzle


Gracious Creature

Gracious creature,
Take flight,
Go

Zoom and roar,
Loom and soar

Fly,
Fly away

Leave this place,
Escape this place

Drink from the ocean,
Have freedom
Eat from the meadow,
Have soul

Fly,
Fly away

Splash the water,
Touch the earth,
Battle the wind,
Flee the fire

Gracious creature,
Embrace life
And go


September Day

The tranquil blue sky
Ruptured with plumes of grey,
The peaceful morning gaze
Reflecting on the pain.

The two colossal towers,
Submerged to dust,
The pleasant sunshine
Distraught by tragic flame

The cool city breeze
Ripped apart by smoke,
The tantalising skyline
Littered with disaster

The world watches,
Transfixed by horror
The world mourns,
Engaged by death

The people's faces,
Burning with dismay
The people's eyes,
Indescribable

The hatred remains,
Silent echoes in the wind
The hatred born,
Unforgivable

The memory reigns,
As history it will lay
The mind shall never let grasp
Of that September Day

syko2006
23-12-2009, 11:50 AM
I especially like ''September Day!''
It's very imaginative writing, the imagery created is amazing!
Well done! :D

Misawa
23-12-2009, 03:59 PM
Cheers matey. Yeah, that one often goes down well.

Meree.
23-12-2009, 04:27 PM
I really like them :) Seems like your very good at alot of things. Well done.

Misawa
23-12-2009, 04:31 PM
Thanks, I appreciate it.

Meree.
23-12-2009, 04:39 PM
Not a problem. I forgot to mention the September day one was my favourite. The words are very meaningful.

Misawa
23-12-2009, 04:40 PM
Thank!

Dinosaurawrr
23-12-2009, 11:53 PM
i really like them :]
your really good at poems id like to hear more :P!!! :D

Misawa
24-12-2009, 12:22 AM
Thanks. I'll try and locate some other oldies.

Gemma
26-12-2009, 06:16 AM
Omg, theyre really good, I especially love the last one, very powerful. You're certainly talented so keep writing ;)

Shelleh
26-12-2009, 06:32 PM
Niceee(:

Misawa
27-12-2009, 02:44 AM
Thanks. I haven't written any new poetry in a few years now, since '07 I think.

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