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Rollerkingdom
02-01-2010, 02:57 PM
So this month theme for StrayPixel is to create a pet!
I've always thought turtles, tortoises were so cute so i decided to make that :)

Resume: A guy (me) checks out the tortoises on catalogue, then check them out on a room to decided whether buy or not, so I end up buying one for myself :)

Animation: 82 Frames

http://i48.tinypic.com/6squfr.gif

p.s: love this icon i made of them together
http://i48.tinypic.com/2vnrwg8.gif


Do not attempt to rip or anything, it will only get you banned from the competition since i have all Work in progress saved.

thorn
02-01-2010, 04:45 PM
Omg Adam!

That is the best alt i've seen in ages


I defo say ELITE.

Love the lil icon..

And i also like the Lil pond idea.

But, i think u should of done the tortoise in different directions because they all walk backwards.. what does the front look like?

Vonko
02-01-2010, 05:16 PM
omg brilliant! you'll be hired soon lol.

Rollerkingdom
02-01-2010, 05:47 PM
Omg Adam!

That is the best alt i've seen in ages


I defo say ELITE.

Love the lil icon..

And i also like the Lil pond idea.

But, i think u should of done the tortoise in different directions because they all walk backwards.. what does the front look like?

haha thanks :) also thanks for the idea..
ill prob make one walking frontwards and add to the animation
will be a pain but oh well :)


omg brilliant! you'll be hired soon lol.

Thank you :D

Pix
02-01-2010, 06:09 PM
that's really good but i don't like the ending bit when everything goes dark with the turtle.

Mickword
02-01-2010, 08:29 PM
AMAZING +REP!

Edited by Tash. (Forum Moderator): Please don't pointless post.

ExtraKen
02-01-2010, 08:50 PM
Looks nice,
Althou I think the shield thing is a bit flat but that will prob be just me lol

Browney
02-01-2010, 10:04 PM
Looks nice,
Althou I think the shield thing is a bit flat but that will prob be just me lol

Nope, its not great. Texture-wise, your work is good. But, the turtle looks flat, both with his feet and shell. The green shelled one, not so much, but definately the black and white one.

Rollerkingdom
02-01-2010, 11:12 PM
Looks nice,
Althou I think the shield thing is a bit flat but that will prob be just me lol


Nope, its not great. Texture-wise, your work is good. But, the turtle looks flat, both with his feet and shell. The green shelled one, not so much, but definately the black and white one.

Really :/ I don't find it flat at all but anyways thank you
ill try to fix it

Rollerkingdom
03-01-2010, 12:27 AM
Thank you both for letting me know..
it was a color reduction that occurred during the making of gif
here's the update
http://i46.tinypic.com/24mgi1d.gif

Fabienne
03-01-2010, 08:27 AM
very amazing. they are so cute, i would totally buy one.


how long did it take to make?

Browney
03-01-2010, 12:10 PM
Thank you both for letting me know..
it was a color reduction that occurred during the making of gif
here's the update
http://i46.tinypic.com/24mgi1d.gif

Better.

dbgtz
03-01-2010, 01:17 PM
They look really square around the bottom and the edges.

Dinosaurawrr
03-01-2010, 01:22 PM
i like what youve done
i think the second one is much better :]
welldone xo
theres nothing i can pick up on tbh^.^

Rollerkingdom
03-01-2010, 05:56 PM
very amazing. they are so cute, i would totally buy one.


how long did it take to make?

hmm about 24-30 hours IN and OUT xD

Rollerkingdom
05-01-2010, 12:48 AM
Updated the starting frames
I love the new logo ♥♥♥
http://i47.tinypic.com/2hn3n02.gif

Perkele
05-01-2010, 01:50 AM
I have to be honest: The turtoise really looks too flat. The animation is well done, but the turtoise, the important part of the picture.. :(

Here a quick sketch, no big art, to show how it'd look better:
http://www.iaza.com/work/100105C/turtlesoarr1200965617-iaza.gif

Rollerkingdom
05-01-2010, 02:18 AM
I have to be honest: The turtoise really looks too flat. The animation is well done, but the turtoise, the important part of the picture.. :(

Here a quick sketch, no big art, to show how it'd look better:
http://www.iaza.com/work/100105C/turtlesoarr1200965617-iaza.gif

Thank you, that looks really good
based on yours i did this to mine.. is it better?
http://i47.tinypic.com/eb7mlz.png

Rollerkingdom
05-01-2010, 04:16 AM
•Turtle shelves updated
http://i50.tinypic.com/23uac8p.gif

Kyle
05-01-2010, 10:05 AM
You've certainly given a little more depth the the shell but the thing that bugs me the most is the 'pumpkins' - very small and lack proper shading.

Rollerkingdom
05-01-2010, 11:33 AM
You've certainly given a little more depth the the shell but the thing that bugs me the most is the 'pumpkins' - very small and lack proper shading.

they arent supposed to be huge since they are for the turtles + thats the way i wanted its shading, thank you though

Lithuaniology
08-01-2010, 05:21 AM
win. nothing else i can say (eh, eh)

AgnesIO
16-01-2010, 05:54 PM
T'is exceptional, although only one thing I could pick out that was wrong!

The tortoise that goes under the hollow log seems to jump at one point to the log, instead of walking all the way. Apart from that fantastic!

Will mark on a .1 per frame scale so out of 8.2 :D 8.1 - as it jumped a bit :)

Smits
16-01-2010, 06:03 PM
great alt although the tortoises look like they dont belong in habbo.

Sunnily
16-01-2010, 06:05 PM
-screams- that is sooo good. Love the things you made to go with them aswell :) Love eh!

Shcl
18-01-2010, 09:46 PM
THATS SO AMAZING WD!

Edited by Tash. (Forum Moderator): Please don't post unconstructively.

Fivas
24-01-2010, 10:32 PM
Wow! that was great! I love the icon as well :D
nice work.

Nicolexo
25-01-2010, 01:05 AM
Aww omg that is amazing! Well done. Bet alot of hard work was put into that :)

Rollerkingdom
29-01-2010, 05:17 PM
THank you everyone =)
yes ive worked really hard on it to include the possible detail i could

Circadia
30-01-2010, 01:25 PM
i love it but as demala said the turtle going into the log seems to walk then jump inot the log thats all i could pick up on otherwise very good ;]

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