Poem: Thoughts (v2)

[Jahova]

This is version two of my poem "Thoughts". A few things have changed since the original, I think it is better. Enjoy.

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# Thoughts (v2)
# Written by Tom Spiteri
# From: http://tomspit.com (http://tomspit.com/)

(http://tomspit.com/)
Waves of thoughts trapped in the walls of my head
Some thoughts I cherish, some thoughts I dread
Brilliant ideas I have never thought of before
The mind seems to cease when I attempt to think of more


If I never had my thoughts then I simply wouldn’t be me
Thoughts are necassary, they allow me to truly see
The thought of certain people both present and past
I’ve always enjoyed my thoughts, I hope they’ll ever last


My thoughts are natural; they cannot be stopped
My thoughts are everlasting; they cannot be forgot
My thoughts are all mine; I will say if they are true
My thoughts are wonderful; they are thoughts of you.

[iChaz]

really good :D

[Jahova]

Thank you.

[HotelUser]

I quite like it too, nice job.

[[Jay]]

That is excellent.
Well done +rep

[Haaaaarry1]

Very good :)

[-K8T!E-]

Wow I love it :)

[Jahova]

Thank you all ;)

[Pix]

Aww i love the ending, nice 1

[leah]

I like it :)

[Jahova]

Thanks both ;)

[Dinosaurawrr]

i really like it
the ending is my fave :D!
really nice ^.^
do you have more ;o id like to see them ^.^

[Jahova]

http://tomspit.com/ for all my poems, film reviews and daily posts about everything.