[T] Giraffes [SP Entry]

[thorn]

Took a couple of days :P..

Wasnt sure how it'd walk so i didnt animate it.

But, a scene of what it'd look like in a room with new stuff. and animating eyes:D

http://i491.photobucket.com/albums/rr272/timothywarburton/Giraffe.gif


Comments?

[Rollerkingdom]

animation is too fast imo, the giraffe is cute but doesnt look very habboish..
loks like you copied what i said on mine "Tortoises are Here" xD

[thorn]

you copied what i said on mine "Tortoises are Here" xD


But the theme of your alt is more jumpy and :D

imagine it like the Xfactor voice over??

Giraffes, Are, HERE!

[Amberr]

I like it looks really good the only fing i wud say is that the animation is abit to fast

[dbgtz]

Right the yellow imo looks kinda disgusting for a giraffe and to me it looks like plastic. Obviously you could have done more like animate but I suppose it would take ages and there is a limited amount of time. Some of the lines on it are really jagged such as it's next when it crosses. the next itself (which also looks like it's about to snap) and around the mouth, I'm sure it would be smoother, the buckets too could use some work.

Also what's up with the straw, do giraffes eat straw? Even if they do there's like 2 or 3 strands, wth!

The horses feet looks like shoes and the environment is plain. Speaking of the environment why the hell is there a banzai tree? Asian giraffe?

Also shift key abuse much, "For Giraffes Of All Sizes", "Pile Of Leaves", "Bucket Of Water" etc etc.

[thorn]

1.The horses feet looks like shoes and the environment is plain. Speaking of the environment why the hell is there a banzai tree? Asian giraffe?

2.Also shift key abuse much, "For Giraffes Of All Sizes", "Pile Of Leaves", "Bucket Of Water" etc etc.

If you look on most real furniture on habbo they all start with a capital..

But the Description of the furni isnt :)

Also the trees, i just put any random trees in lol. As you cant get much selection :)

[dbgtz]

Make your own? :S
Yukkas would have been better as they're taller.

[Lithuaniology]

I agree, the animation is way too fast. Other than that the giraffe looks great. Habbo do have a tendency to make pets look fat.

[thorn]

What Ive Learnt: its too fast.




Thanks for all comments :D

[Jordan:A]

too much brown in the top of its head

[ExtraKen]

Try to make his neck more smooth cuz now it looks like some pieces have been cutout.

Also try to get a little dark yellow/orange shade cuz as tom said it looks kind of plastic at the moment.

The shape of the giraff doesnt rlly look giraffy either as it should be lower on the back.

In link you find a pic of a girraffe shape so you might understand what I mean

http://shoyinka.files.wordpress.com/2009/02/giraffe-pic1.jpg

[its-me-sam]

Shame you didn't draw the giraffe's stages of drinking as well! http://www.dongettyphoto.com/kenya/images/Reticulated-Giraffe.jpg

[Nicolexo]

That's cute altho you might want to make it a little slower :) goodluck (:

[Accipiter]

the shading on the giraffe is terrible

Edited by Tash. (Forum Moderator): Please don't post unconstructively.

[thorn]

the shading on the giraffe is terrible

Edited by Tash. (Forum Moderator): Please don't post unconstructively.


Oh Well :)

DIdnt want to make it too yellow.. or itll be like MS paint colour yellow..

[Accipiter]

the spots on it has little detail from the glances we get from the animation (which is what they will be getting in sp) and the legs look quite scare, darken it out :P

[Kyle]

could you at least slow down the animation and give us a separate image of the giraffe alone pleasE?

[brodeo]

Needs more shading, I remember Roboevil once made a Giraffe for his zoo, have a glance at it to see an expert one. I'm not sure about how his face seems to have much more brown than the rest of his body, should be more evenly distributed.